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Redemption of Eva

Redemption of Eva

K. Blackthorn

The Hidden Valley

February 26, 2026 by K. Blackthorn

    Up ahead, the path dipped into a valley, flanked on either side by majestic mountains.  Perry noticed the change in Eva—her steps seemed lighter, her fingers barely resting in his, a quiet smile playing at her lips.

    Wheat fields stretched out on either side of the path.  On the right, ripe grain swayed gently behind sturdy fences.  But the left side had long been abandoned.  Thistles tangled through scattered wheat, the fences lay broken, and a wooden shed slumped inward, warped with rot and decay.

    On the far side of the wheat field, a wooded ravine traced the base of the mountains.  In the distance, waterfalls crashed into hidden pools below—their steady roar barely audible.  The water spilled into a stream that wound southward through the trees until it vanished into the forest.  The breeze carried its scent—fresh and clean, laced with damp earth, moss, and the faintest hint of fruit trees.

    Beside the ravine stood a palace—its roofs gleaming in the midday sun, towers rising above the treetops.

    “It’s not what I was expecting,” Eva said, nodding toward the Interpreter’s House.

    Perry nodded.  He hadn’t been sure what to expect either.

    “I imagined something more like a comfortable cottage,” she said.  “The Wicket Gate was so small, and…” She traced a shape in the air with her finger, searching for the word.  At last, “Plain.”  Her tone held no contempt.  “And the Prince was so humble.”

    “Yet you recognized Him at once,” said Perry.  

    “Yes,” she whispered.  “Nothing in His dress suggested royalty—not like the men I knew in the City of Destruction.  Or in Carnal Policy.  But His eyes…” Her voice softened.  “There was something I’d never seen before.  Confidence.”  She paused. “No.  Not confidence.  Authority.  I don’t doubt the wind and rain would obey his voice.”

    Perry felt the truth of it.  He’d looked more like a gardener than a gatekeeper—yet there was something unmistakable about Him.

    “And yet there was kindness in Him,” she said.  “Men rarely rise to such power without turning cruel.  I’ve seen it—again and again.”

    “No, not cruel—sorrowful,” Perry said.  “As if he carried the weight of the whole Valley of Destruction.  Grieving every soul lost in the Slough… or who turned away before reaching the Gate.”

    At last they reached the Interpreter’s House.  A narrow path cut through the wheat fields, leading to the entrance.  Its white walls, perhaps limestone, seemed to glow in the sunlight.  Windows of many colors lined the façade in careful rows, beneath steeply sloped roofs.  Two square towers blended into the ravine’s cliff face, one crowned with parapets.  A third, taller tower rose from the far side, topped with a small room—its pointed roof and windows on every side catching the light.

    Stairs led up to the entrance—a solid wooden door beneath a narrow balcony, supported on either side by statues of Shining Ones.

    On the left side of the House lay a garden filled with lovely trees and a wide variety of flowers—carnations, lilies and tulips—with benches nestled among rose bushes in full bloom.

    They climbed the stairs to the entryway and knocked—first Eva, then Perry.  He hadn’t meant to follow her knock, but he did. As if it mattered that his hand touched the door too.

    A young woman in a gray wool dress and apron opened the door.  Sunlight caught in her silver hair, and when she lifted her gaze, her eyes were a startling, impossible blue.  She looked at them—not past them.  At them.

    “Pray, what name may I give, that I may tell the Lord within?”

    “I am Eva.” She hesitated.  “I was known as Wanton.”  She swallowed.  “This is my companion, Perry.  The Prince bid us knock and inquire within.”

    The girl turned at once and hurried into the House, her voice carrying down the hall.  “Can you imagine who stands at the door?” she called, leaving it ajar.

    Eva’s face flushed, and she drew a sharp breath.  She smoothed her dress yet remained still.  Perry reached for the door—but she shook her head.  She inhaled once more, then lifted her chin.

    Then the door swung open, and the Interpreter stood before them.  His robes were plain, but on Him they seemed finer than any garment Perry had ever seen.  His eyes held the wisdom of ages, tempered by a gentleness unlike anything Perry had known.

    He extended both hands to Eva.  “Come in, dear heart,” He said, his face alight with joy.  “We were just speaking of you.”

    Men and women gathered about the Interpreter, their faces bright.  The young woman who had opened the door smiled serenely.

    The Interpreter turned to Perry.  “Welcome, Perry,” He said warmly.  He led them into a room and bade them sit and rest.  Men and women pressed in about them, smiling.  The men took Perry’s hand and clapped him on the back in good cheer.

    “Tell me, Eva,” the Interpreter said.  “What led you to set out on your journey?  We’ve waited for you many years.”

    Eva drew the invitation from the hidden pocket of her dress.  “I didn’t—couldn’t—believe it was truly for me.”  Her voice caught. “But when Perry came to… my party I decided I didn’t care anymore.  I couldn’t wait any longer.  Not an hour.  Not even a single minute.”

    “When word reached us of the midnight Pilgrims,” said the Interpreter, “there was great joy.  Our cook, Taste-that-which-is-Good has begun preparing a celebration.”

    The Interpreter gestured toward the young woman who had opened the door.  “Innocent will assist you in your preparations.”  

    Innocent curtsied.  “Please follow me, my Lady.”

***

    Perry watched as Innocent led Eva through the doorway and into the hall.  Something stirred in his memory—but when he reached for it, it slipped away.  The more he pressed, the further it retreated.

    He turned back to the Interpreter.

   “Follow me,” said the Interpreter.

    The Interpreter led him into a parlor that had recently been swept—the broom still resting against the wall.  He took his seat in an armchair beside a low table and motioned for Perry to sit opposite him.

    A serving man entered bearing a decanter of amber liquor and two tumblers banded in gold.  With metal tongs, he lifted pieces of ice from a wooden box and set them into each glass.

    Again—that familiar stirring.

    “Perry.”  The Interpreter took a measured sip, then set his glass upon the table.  “Peregrine Graycloak.  I have waited for you.”

    Perry lifted his glass and took a sip.  It was sweet as honey—and it burned as it went down.

    “Who are you?”  The Interpreter’s gaze did not waver.

    Perry exhaled.  “I hoped you would tell me.”

    The Interpreter’s gaze remained steady.  He did not answer.

    “I have been a seeker,” said Perry.  “I have been a dreamer.” He closed his eyes. “I remember things I ought not remember.  I know things I ought not know.  But myself…”  He opened his eyes again.  “That I do not know.”

   The Interpreter inclined his head.  “What do you want?”

   “I want to understand—”

   “No.”  The word was quiet, but final.  “The Author wants to understand.  What do you want?”

    Perry studied the amber in his glass.  Minutes stretched.  They drank in silence.  The Interpreter did not hurry him.

    “I want to be with her.”

    “Yes,” said the Interpreter.  “That was your choice.  Not the Author’s.”

    Perry nodded.

    “But was it your choice—or hers?”  The Interpreter regarded him steadily.  “I can tell you what you are, but only you can tell who you are.”  He lifted his glass, then set it down again.  “You’ve escaped the Law of Accident.  Now you live under the Law of Fate.  But that is not enough.” A pause.  “You must learn Will.”

    “How do I do that?” Perry asked.  He reached into his satchel and drew out the ring encircled in lapis lazuli.  For a moment, he turned it in his fingers.  Then he set it upon the table between them.

    “Do you know what this is?”  The Interpreter lifted the ring and held it to the light.  “It is the signet of the King—and the trust of the Author.”

    “The Author entrusted me with protecting her.”

    “No.”  The Interpreter’s voice was calm.  “He placed it in your hand because it belongs there.”  He turned the ring between his fingers.  “You are the dream the Dreamer dreamt—the answer the Seeker sought.”  A pause.  “She believes you were made to walk beside her.”  His gaze lifted to Perry’s.  “What she does not yet see… is that she was given to walk with you.”

    “And this?” Perry asked touching the ring lightly.  “Is this Will?”

    “Yes,” said the Interpreter.  “No.”  He turned the ring between his fingers.  “Will is born where Yes and No resist one another.”  He looked at Perry.  “The Prince is your pattern.  He possessed all authority—yet chose to lay it down.”

    “I understand,” Perry said quietly.  

    The Interpreter held his gaze.  “Are you willing to lay down everything for her, as the Prince did his Bride?”

    The room seemed very still.

    “Yes.”

    He did not look away.

    The Interpreter drained the last of his drink and rose.  “Come,” he said.  “Your new garments are ready.”

***

    Eva followed Innocent up a narrow spiral staircase that wound through one of the towers.  The steps curved tightly beneath her feet until at last they reached the third floor, where a small hallway stretched ahead, lined with several doors.

    Innocent led her to the last one and pushed it open.

    The room beyond was spacious, the ceilings higher than she expected.  Fine rugs softened the wooden floor.  A couch and a single chair sat near the window.  An oak-framed bed stood against the far wall, covered with a simple wool blanket.  On a small side table rested a hairbrush, and across from it a looking glass hung quietly on the wall.

    “Your room, Lady Evadne,” Innocent said softly.

    Before Eva could answer, a matron appeared in the doorway, hands folded neatly before her.

    “Have the girls fetch hot water,” Innocent said.  The matron curtsied and disappeared down the hall.

    The faintest flicker caught Eva’s eye.  In the corner a cobweb shimmered in the light, a spider poised at its center.  She smiled and lifted her hand, stopping just short of the delicate threads.  “I am in good company.”

    Innocent nodded.  “Yes.  She takes hold with her hands and is in kings’ palaces.”

–

    At the back of the room, a narrow door opened onto the top of the tower she had glimpsed as they approached the house.  Eva stepped out onto the parapet.  The ravine spread beneath her in breathtaking sweep.  Across the stream, in a broad clearing cut from the trees, stood a stately palace.  A great crowd had gathered before its gates.

    “What are they doing?”  Movement rippled through the crowd below.  Steel flashed.  A skirmish had broken out.

    “The Interpreter spares no expense,” Innocent said.  “Orchards.  Wheat fields.  Flowers and sheep.  Actors and musicians.  Rooms.”  A small smile touched her lips.  “And my favorite of them all.”  She pointed at the Stately Palace.  “He built it just to teach one lesson.  That you must fight for what you hold dear.”

   “Tell me, Lady Evadne—did you encounter any opposition on your way here?”

    “No.” Eva shook her head slowly.  The lie lay heavy on her tongue.

–

    When Eva stepped back into the room, she froze.  In the looking glass, Madame Wanton stared back at her.  The mask lowered.  Eyelashes fluttered.  Lips parted in a practiced pout.  A coy glance slipped sideways—an invitation.

    The mirror splintered.  Vee looked back at her.  Young.  Uncertain.  Practicing the expression she ought to have.  Eva squeezed her eyes shut.  When she opened them again, the glass was whole.  Only her own reflection remained.

    When Eva turned, she noticed steam drifting from a doorway on the other side of the room.  A serving girl stood there, kettle in hand.  “The bath is ready,” she told Innocent.  She curtsied and slipped away.

    A white dress lay across the bed, its silver embroidery catching the light.

    Innocent held out a crock in one hand and a bar of soap in the other.  “Choose.”

    Eva lifted the bar first and brought it to her nose.  Roses.  Sweet and familiar.  She closed her eyes for a moment.  She liked it. Then she set it aside and took the crock.  She lifted the lid.  Rosemary.  Clean.  Sharp.  Enduring.  Much better for the road.  “This one,” she said.

    “Let me help you out of your clothes,” Innocent said.

    Eva stepped back instead.  She reached into the hidden pocket of her dress and withdrew the King’s invitation.  Then the silver lily.  She laid them carefully on the bed beside the white gown.

    One by one she drew her dagger from her body—two from her sleeves, one from her boot, the smallest from her bodice.  Steel against linen.  She placed each beside the others.  

    She folded her scarf with deliberate care.  Untied her sash.  Then she turned her back to Innocent.  The buttons loosened.  The dress slipped from her shoulders and fell at her feet—patched cloth, stiff with dried mud from the Slough.  She did not look down at it.

    Innocent waited, eyes lowered, as Eva crossed the adjoining room.  The warmth of rugs gave way to cool slate beneath her bare feet.  Steam drifted upward from a waiting wooden tub.  She shed the last of her garments and stepped into the water.

    Innocent stepped into the steam and dipped a sponge into the rosemary soap.  The sharp scent rose with the heat as she began to wash Eva’s back—firm, steady strokes.

   Then she took Eva’s hand gently in her own and worked a small brush beneath her fingernails, loosening the last traces of the road.

    “I did encounter opposition on the way here.”  Eva swallowed.  “At the castle outside the Narrow Gate.”

    Innocent’s piercing blue eyes lifted to hers.  Under that steady gaze, Eva felt suddenly exposed.

    “I met Tisiphone, and Alecto.”  Vee’s eyes rose in her mind—hungry for approval.  And Mama’s back.  She could not remember Mama’s face.  Only the curve of her shoulders as she stirred the pot.  “I relived the day I left,” Eva said softly.  “The day I ran away from home.”

    Innocent said nothing.  She lifted a dipper and poured warm water over Eva’s head.  It ran down her face, over her shoulders, carrying the scent of rosemary with it.  Gentle fingers worked the lather into her hair.  

    For a long moment, there was only the sound of water.  Then Innocent spoke.  “Why did you choose rosemary?  Don’t you think Perry would have preferred the rose?”

    A sharp pang of regret pierced her.  “What does that have to do with—”

    “You made a choice,” Innocent said evenly.  “It seemed good at the moment.”

    “That’s different.”

    “Not at all.”  Innocent’s hands were steady in her hair.  “Every yes is also a no.  Sometimes to one thing.  Sometimes to a dozen.  There is no life without guilt.”

    She dipped the ladle again and poured the water slowly, rinsing the lather from Eva’s hair.

    “What do you know of guilt?”  The words struck harder than she intended.  Too hard.  Regret flared at once.

    “The Prince has accepted you.”  Innocent paused.  “I accept you.  Guilt cannot live in the presence of the King.”  She held out a towel.  Eva rose from the bath.  Cool air brushed her damp skin as Innocent wrapped the towel around her shoulders.

    The dress was of the finest cloth—dazzling white, silver thread worked in delicate patterns at the neckline, the cuffs, and along the hem.  It settled against her skin as though it had always belonged there.  Soft.  Light.  Perfectly fitted.  As if it had been made for her alone.  

   Her breath caught.  Leather holsters had been sewn into the sleeves.  A slow smile curved her lips.  She slid each dagger into place, feeling their familiar weight return to her arms.  Balanced.  Secure.

    She looked up at Innocent, satisfaction flickering in her eyes.

   “How did…”

    Innocent did not answer.  She took Eva’s hand and led her to the chair by the window.  Eva sat.  Innocent lifted the brush and drew it slowly through her hair.

   “One.”  The bristle tugged lightly at the damp strands.  “Two.”  She counted each stroke.

    “After that, Alecto—”

    “That is not what is troubling you.”  Innocent’s voice was gentle, but firm.  “If you had failed Tisiphone or Alecto, you would not be here now.”  Her hands never stopped their steady rhythm through Eva’s hair.  “Tell me, dear heart—what did Megaera show you?”

    Eva looked up sharply.  A tear slipped free before she could stop it.  “He…” Her throat tightened.  “Perry is going to die.”  The words felt solid in her mouth.  Heavy.  “It wasn’t a vision,” she whispered.  “It was real.”

    Pain flickered in Innocent’s blue eyes.  She did not deny it.  Did not soften it.  She leaned close, her voice barely more than breath.  “Love is stronger than death.”

    Innocent gathered Eva’s hair and tied it back with a narrow ribbon.  Then she picked up the lily pendant and turned it slowly in her fingers.  The silver caught the light.  She stepped behind Eva and fastened the clasp at her neck.  Cool metal settled against her skin.  

    “The Prince has always loved the lilies.”  Innocent stepped back and studied her for a long moment.  Then she smiled.  “There. Fair as the Moon.”

    Innocent slipped her hand into the folds of her dress and drew out a small mirror, its edge bound in worn brass.  She placed it gently in Eva’s palm and closed her fingers around it.

    “It’s my gift,” she said softly.  “To remind you.”

    Eva stared into the mirror.  For a moment, she did not recognize the woman looking back.

   Not Vee.  Not Vadna.  Not Madame Wanton.  Not even Lady Evadne.

   Just Eva—the beloved.

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Letter to Thoughtful

December 28, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

Dear Thoughtful—

    I sit in my study now, looking out over the River of Life, beginning to write the story of my life—how I left Uncertain, and everything that followed.  As you know Stephen King once wrote:

Writing is magic, as much the water of life as any other creative art.  The water is free.  So drink.

Drink and be filled up.

    I was once told that my writing style most closely resembles Tolstoy—but when I first opened War and Peace, I was immediately humbled.  My work felt amateurish and childish by comparison, especially when it came to dialogue.

    So I came up with a plan: I would rewrite War and Peace as a practice exercise—set in the Dream-Lands I love and call home.

   War and Peace opens with a party scene.  One phrase kept echoing in my mind: Party at Wanton’s.  I thumbed through the book Beautiful gave me and found the passage: 

Then Miss Light-Mind added as follows: ‘Come, put this kind of talk away. I was yesterday at Madame Wanton’s, where we were as merry as the maids. For who do you think should be there, but I, and Mrs. Love-the-Flesh, and three or four more, with Mr. Lechery, Mrs. Filth, and some others. So there we had music and dancing, and what else was meet to fill up the pleasure. And I dare say, my lady herself is an admirably well-bred gentlewoman, and Mr. Lechery is as pretty a fellow.’

    Madame Wanton fit the profile of Anna Pavlovna perfectly.  I would attend her party and speak with each guest, beginning with Miss Light-Mind, recording every conversation.  But even Dreams have rules—and they were only characters in my Book.

    So I created a Dream within a Dream—and a character to represent me:  Perry.  He had no backstory, no defined personality.  And yet, he chose his own name.  I can’t explain it.  As an act of pure mischief, I modeled his appearance on Faithful—the one Madame Wanton once tried to seduce at the Hill of Difficulty.

    My instructions to him were simple:  he would speak to one character per scene.  He could say or do anything he wished—free of consequence.  After recording each encounter, I would reset the Dream, and he could begin again.  Over and over, until he—or rather I—had learned to capture character and craft dialogue perfectly.  No one would remember anything—except him.

    His first attempt was a disaster.  He quoted Prince Vasily from War and Peace verbatim—but delivered it so poorly that Madame Wanton mocked him.  Miss Light-Mind only wanted to dance.  When he tried to pull her over for a quiet conversation, she immediately lost interest.  

    He seemed almost panicked by the experience.  I reassured him he could try again—this time, to capture Prince Vasily’s insincerity and simply dance with Miss Light-Mind.  But something strange happened.  Madame Wanton remembered.  And as he approached Miss Light-Mind again, Miss Inconsiderate bumped into him.

    Miss Inconsiderate’s personality completely took me by surprise—she was nothing like I imagined.  Her clumsiness and insecurity were so endearing that I felt a pang of heartbreak when I reset the Dream for Perry.

    Then Madame Wanton remembered again.  Their dance struck me as particularly strange—more a duel than a waltz.  And her name… Evadne.  Where had that come from?

    I was just about to reset the Dream again when she knocked on Perry’s door.  Her simple dress—and the name Eva—caught me off guard.  I watched, curious, as she led him outside the City and began to tell her story in the moonlight.

    But something didn’t make sense.  Perry could feel it too.  Why had she dragged him into the night just to tell him about herself?  Surely she knew she would remember again?

    It’s no exaggeration to say I was dumbstruck when she announced she wanted to go to the Celestial City and place her invitation in the King’s hand.  So much for my plans about dialogue writing and War and Peace.

    Eva has proven a particularly stubborn character to write.  She refuses to do anything she doesn’t want to.  I’ve discovered this more than once—especially when she chose to endure the mud of the Slough rather than ever set foot in Carnal Policy again to take the bridge there.

    For now, she waits patiently at the Wicket Gate.  Good-Will has washed her feet, and she seems perfectly content to remain there with Perry while I write my own story.

    So I pick up my pen and begin to write—about how Mom and Dad abandoned me in Uncertain.  When I finish, I’ll bind and send you a copy.  Then, I’ll return to Eva and Perry’s story.

Sincerely,

Seeker

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Cheshire Cat

December 25, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

I’ve been mad for fucking years, absolutely years
Been over the edge for yonks
Been working me buns off for bands
I’ve always been mad, I know I’ve been mad like the most of us
Very hard to explain why you’re mad, even if you’re not mad

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The Prince’s Birthday

June 29, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    The days passed like a dream.  Seeker and Beautiful were inseparable by day—she sat with him as he studied, and they read her Book together.  Sometimes she couldn’t resist visiting him in his dreams.  But he always made sure she had enough rest to wake refreshed the next morning.

    At last, Christmas Eve arrived.  When they reached Kind’s tent, Liora greeted Seeker with a warm hug.

    “Hello, Miss Beautiful,” Tirzah said, smiling sweetly.  Then she turned her piercing eyes on Seeker.  “It’s about time.”

   They ate a humble meal together by candlelight, then stepped outside.  Around a nearby campfire, the shepherds were already gathering.

    Kind began to speak:

    It came to pass in those days that the ruler of Vanity determined to tax the world.  And Joseph went up to Sincere to be taxed with his betrothed wife, Mary, who was with child.

   Now when they arrived, her time came to give birth, and she brought her firstborn son and laid him in a manger, for there was no room for them in the inn.

    Now there were shepherds in the Delectable Mountains watching their sheep by night.

    And a Shining One appeared to them, and the glory of the King shone around them, and they were sore afraid.  Then the Shining One said, “Don’t be afraid.  I bring you good news of great joy for all people.

   “Today, in Sincere the Prince is born who will save his people.    

   “And this will be the sign to you: you will find the baby, wrapped and lying in a manger.”

    And suddenly with the Shining One was a multitude praising the King and singing.

    “Glory be to the King in the highest heavens, and peace to earth, good will to men.”

   When the Shining One was gone, the shepherds went and found the baby, wrapped and lying in a manger, just as he said.

    Kind paused and gestured toward a bright star shining in the sky, which had appeared while he was speaking.

    When Emmanuel was born in Sincere, Wise Men came from afar, following His star.  The star went before them until it stopped at the place the baby was.  When they entered the house, they found the baby with his mother, Mary, and they fell down and worshipped Him.  They opened their treasures and presented Him with gifts: gold, frankincense, and myrrh.

    The shepherds began trading small gifts.  Seeker gave Beautiful a handbag he had made for her with his own hands.  And Beautiful gave Seeker a music-box—it played his favorite song.

   One by one, the shepherds left quietly.  Kind and Liora bid Seeker and Beautiful good night and invited them to sit by the fire as long as they liked.

   They sat there long after the fire had died, the embers glowing faintly in the dark.  Beautiful fell asleep leaning against him, and Seeker nodded off beside her.

    He woke to find his lips inches from hers.  The fragrance of wheat fields on her intoxicated him.  Her breath, slow and steady, brushed against his face.  He leaned in and kissed her, tenderly.

    He pulled away and gazed at her sleeping face—her hair, her eyes, her lips.  Oh, her lips.  She opened her eyes and smiled—the smile he loved so much.  The sky seemed to light up, dimming even the Christmas star.  She leaned in and kissed him, then slowly pulled away.

   They stared, lost in each other’s gaze.  Then they both leaned in and kissed passionately.

Filed Under: Seeker

The Open Gate

May 28, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Stillness filled the air when Seeker and Companion reached the Wicket Gate. Beelzebub’s Castle loomed beside them, its shadow stretching over the path, but there was no sign of danger—no whistling arrows, no growling hounds, only the rustle of the breeze and the soft creak of the gate.

   The Wicket Gate was exactly as Seeker had imagined it—a small wooden door set into the stone wall, with the words inscribed “Knock and it shall be opened unto you.”  But the door was already standing open.

    He stood there staring.  Why was the door already open?  He raised his hand to knock, but what was the point?  He stepped hesitantly over the threshold and looked this way and that. Where was Good-Will?  There was no opposition, but there was no welcome, either.

    On the other side of the gate, he spotted a summer-parlor for the welcoming of Pilgrims, but no one was inside. A layer of dust coated everything—the table, the chair, and the couch. No one had used the parlor for a long time.   

    On the table was a brass trumpet, dusty and tarnished from long disuse. Seeker could almost hear the welcoming chorus celebrating new arrivals, but now it just stood there in silence.

    There was a basin and pitcher.  He could imagine Good-Will washing the dust from a traveler’s feet.  The mud from the Slough had dried on his clothes and skin, flaking away as the decaying odor of the Slough mixed with the stale smell of his sweat—he definitely needed to wash.  But there was no towel, and the pitcher was empty.

    He picked up a small tin cup from the table, his mouth dry with the dust of the road and exhaustion. But there was no water to quench his thirst.

    Companion entered the room, shrugging but with kindness in his eyes. “Times change, my friend.” He took the cup from Seeker’s hands, poured some water from his canteen, swished it around several times, and poured it out. Then he filled it completely and handed it to Seeker.

    The cool water refreshed Seeker. He swallowed every drop and put the tin cup into his satchel. He stepped outside, and the Narrow Way stretched before him, reaching the horizon, straight as a rule could make it.    

    Things were different than he expected, but now he had direction. And he had a friend. He drew a deep breath and let it out in a sigh of relief.

 

Filed Under: Chapter, Seeker

The Crossroads

May 23, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    They passed an abandoned village, its buildings silent and empty as if time had passed it by, while the wind slipped through its streets, stirring dust and dry earth into the heavy air and setting old beams creaking faintly, threatening to collapse at any minute.

    A jagged, rocky hill rose beyond it, crowned by a fortress of dark stone, its walls and towers lined with wooden hoardings—Beelzebub’s Castle.

    This must be the castle from which goblins had rained down fiery arrows at Christian.  Yet Companion showed no alarm; if he noticed it at all, he gave no indication.  Seeker noticed the unnatural silence.  The hoardings stood empty, and no archers manned the walls or towers.  The castle just stood there—dark, lifeless, and ruined, yet still imposing.

    The path passed the village and wound around Beelzebub’s Castle until, at last, they arrived at a crossroads, where the road turned and led back toward the Slough.  A narrower path branched off toward the Castle, where the hill ended in a sheer cliff, affording the fortress a clear view of a small gate set in a wall running to the distant mountains of Sinai.

    Companion pointed at the gate in the distance and said with a grin, “There’s your Wicket Gate.”

    From the distance, everything seemed exactly as his Book described.  The Wicket Gate was small and unassuming, standing in the shadow of Beelzebub’s Castle.  But something seemed… wrong.  Where was the light to guide travelers from the valley of Destruction?  And why was the way no longer guarded?

    Seeker turned to look at Companion, who seemed completely unconcerned and perfectly at ease. Seeing Companion’s calm, Seeker pushed his doubts aside and continued following him as they turned onto the path to the Wicket Gate.

 

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Mount Sinai

May 23, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Companion studied the book in his hands—black leather-bound, the title in gold letters: The Pilgrim’s Progress.  He could tell from the worn edges that Seeker had read it often, but it was well kept—handled with care, even reverence.

    The book opened to a bookmarked page—at the top, the top of the page read: Christian and Hopeful at the River of Life.  The bookmark was a slip of paper, marked with a drawing of a strange bird—black and white, with an orange beak.  He flipped through the book, catching names of familiar places—Slough of Despond, Wicket Gate, Interpreter’s House.

    Storm clouds gathered behind a mountain rising in the distance, its rocky slopes jagged and steep.  Lightning split the sky above it, followed by thunder—low and rolling, echoing from far off.   

    “Look, it’s Mount Sinai.”  Seeker pointed at the mountain, then at his Book.  “Christian got sidetracked at the beginning of his journey.”

    Companion flipped through the pages until he found the part, read in silence, and nodded.

    Winding switchbacks climbed Sinai in an arduous ascent, and an occasional gust of wind carried the faintest scent of charred rock. The village of Morality perched atop the heights, its modest buildings barely visible against the sky. A cathedral steeple pierced the skyline above the clustered rooftops.

    “Now that I see it with my own eyes,” said Seeker, “I wonder how Christian was so easily led astray.”
    “If you come from the City of Destruction, there’s a faint rise—you can’t see what’s clear from here.”  Companion handed the Book back to Seeker.  “Though the path to it is overgrown now—no one wants to brave the climb and the fire.  Don’t judge a path by its difficulty, or, as I said before, by how many walk it.” He pointed at the village at the top of Sinai. “Morality is the way of rules, but the Narrow Way is about relationships.”

    Seeker placed the Book back close to his heart and then looked to the path ahead.

 

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The Broad Way

May 21, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Seeker opened his eyes.  For a moment, he thought he was still in the Slough.  No—he was lying on grass, his head propped up.  He was deathly cold.  His hand shot to his chest—his Book was still there.  He coughed and sat up.

    A man squatted beside him, tending a small fire.  He introduced himself as Companion.  There was a twinkle in his eyes—not mocking, but more like a ray of sunlight breaking through bright clouds.

    Seeker wasn’t quite sure why he’d said he was from the City of Destruction.  But something in Companion’s gaze—steady, knowing—made it impossible to hold the rest back.  His story came pouring out, or at least the part about his journey.  There was no judgment in Companion’s eyes.  Only understanding.

    He ate the bread Companion offered and warmed himself beside the fire.

    “Is this yours?” Companion asked, handing him the staff.  “I found it in the mud next to you.”  He nodded toward the Slough.

    Seeker was still weak, but warmth and food had steadied him. So, they set out toward the Wicket Gate—staff in hand.

     A wide, well-trodden path stretched out before them, and Companion walked with steady purpose, sure of his direction. Seeker walked beside him, leaning on his staff for support.

    “The way is different than I expected… I imagined it to be… narrower.”
    Companion laughed.  “Judge a path by where it leads, not by how many people walk it.  But you’re right—this isn’t the Narrow Way.  This path leads to Pretense.”  He paused for effect, glanced at Seeker, a smile tugging at the corner of his mouth.  “Which is where we don’t want to go.   That’s why we aren’t walking that way.”  He pointed back the way they had come.   

    Companion continued, his voice calm and firm.  “I’ve pulled a few people out of the Slough, but not a single one this far off the path.”
    Seeker hesitated.  “I came from Uncertain.  It’s just easier to say the City of Destruction.  No one’s heard of Uncertain.”  Companion nodded.  He didn’t say a word—it was clear he hadn’t heard of it either.  “It’s not exactly a lie.  I do come from the City of Destruction, but…”  He swallowed hard.  “My parents brought me to Uncertain when I was young, and…”
    “Why the Wicket Gate?”
   “Well, there is no future in Uncertain.  And no one welcomed me back to the City of Destruction.  To be honest, I don’t even know the way. Besides…”

    He reached into his jacket and pulled out his Book and handed it to Companion.  “If I can just get to the Wicket Gate, I’ll be certain of the truth.”

    “What about your family?  Didn’t they give you any guidance?”
    “My father told me not to take the journey.”  He let out a bitter laugh.  “I told him that…”  He didn’t finish the sentence.  “Mother, well, she…”  He paused, then smiled.  “I have a little brother.  He’s too young, really.  We don’t get along well anyway.”

    Companion smiled warmly.  “Now I know how you ended up in Despond.  But all that is behind you now.”  

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Companion Finds Seeker

May 20, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Companion rolled up his bedroll and sifted the ashes of the campfire with his boot, ensuring no embers remained. He’d sent his men back to the cottage the afternoon before, but something inside—he couldn’t name it—had urged him to stay one more night.  He packed the last loaf of bread into his satchel, slung the waterbag over his shoulder, picked up his staff, and set out.

    He followed the edge of the Slough, surveying their progress.  It had been a good week, all things considered.  They’d dumped thousands of cart-loads of the King’s best instructions into the mire to mend it—yet it looked no different.

    A robin sang a sweet, melancholic tune. Companion whistled along. The faint scent of wildflowers lingered in the morning air, almost enough to cover the stench of the Slough.  Something caught his eye.

    A young man lay motionless, face-down in the mire at the edge of the Slough, his clothes caked with mud.  Companion rushed to his side, knelt, and gently turned him over, listening for breath.  He was still alive.

    Without hesitation, Companion stepped into the Slough.   The mud gurgled and shifted with a sluggish, sucking sound.  He lifted the young man from the mire, heedless of the mud soaking into his clothes, and carried him to the grass.

    He lifted the young man’s head and slid his bedroll beneath it, then took a cloth from his satchel, dampened it with a few drops from his waterbag, and gently wiped the Slough’s filth from his face.  His skin was pale and cold, chilled by the Slough’s mire.

    He’d just coaxed a small fire to life when he heard a ragged inhale behind him. The young man sat up, rubbing his arms. Companion passed him the waterbag. He took a sip, then huddled close to the fire.

    “Looks like you’ve seen better days…”

   “Seeker-for-Truth.  My friends just call me Seeker.”

   “I doubt this was what you were seeking,” His eyes twinkled as he gestured toward the Slough. “I’m Companion.”

    Seeker nodded.

    “How did you find yourself in this… situation?”

    “I was trying to get to the Wicket Gate.  I came from the City of Destruction.”

    “Strange way to get to the Wicket Gate.  Didn’t you see the bridge?”

    “Bridge?”  Seeker seemed confused.  “The sun was setting, and I’d been robbed… in Stupidity.”

    “That’s quite the detour.”  He laughed.

    A stubborn look crossed Seeker’s face. There was something he wasn’t saying—but Companion didn’t press the point.

    “Well, Seeker, you’re in luck. I’m passing by the Wicket Gate. You can even walk with me all the way to the Interpreter’s House, if you want.”  He reached into his satchel and handed Seeker the loaf of bread.  “Eat, my friend.  You have a long road ahead.”  He paused.  “But it’s nothing compared to the Slough. That, I promise.”

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Slough of Despond

May 15, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Seeker quickened his steps as the fading sunlight cast long shadows.  Not far from Stupidity, he reached the source of the river: the Slough of Despond, where waters bled out from the mire, murky with what the bog could no longer hold.

    The Slough stretched before him, dark and treacherous.  Mist clung to the reeds, and blackened pools shifted silently.  The stench of decay, damp earth, and rotting vegetation pressed in, a hint of stagnant air catching in his throat.

    Today was not going according to plan.  He’d been robbed.  The sun was down, and his stomach growled—reminding him of the bread he’d left in the mud. The far side was lost in darkness. Unlike in his Book, there were no steppingstones.

    There was nowhere to rest—not even a tree in sight. The air carried a damp chill.  Laughter drifted from Stupidity, low and mean. It tangled with the sucking squelch of mud, the ripple of distant water, and the whisper of reeds in the wind.

    Just beyond where the Slough spilled into the river, scattered patches of solid ground broke the surface. Not enough to cross the Slough—but enough to reach the far bank.  He tapped the ground with his staff.

    He took one step. The ground was soft, but it held. He took another—his boot slipped, and he barely caught himself before his other foot plunged into the muck.  He tested the ground ahead, but his staff found no bottom.  The cold, sucking mire closed on his legs.  Damp crept through his clothes as he tried to turn, each step dragged heavy by the mire.  Mists thickened around him, obscuring the blackened pools.

    He stood very still.  Beneath him, the shifting mud gurgled softly.  Reeds rustled in unseen currents.  Mist wrapped around him, cold and clinging.  The stench of decay grew stronger as the mud stirred—stagnant water reeking of rot.  The air thickened in his mouth, musty and damp, almost choking.

    He was thankful he carried no burden, unlike Christian in his Book.  Still, he sank.  Standing still was no use. He listened—for laughter drifting from the village.  Not so mighty now.  Was that his imagination?  He turned, trying to face Stupidity, to retrace his steps.  But the sound echoed, impossible to place.

    He was waist-deep in mud, darkness pressing close. Fog shifted, faintly lit by unseen sources. Shadows moved within it. Distorted shapes rippled through the water. The mire fell silent, broken only by his labored breathing, the slosh of movement, an occasional ripple, and the dull squelch of sucking mud.

    “Help!” he cried.
    Help? the Slough echoed back, as if mocking.
    A bittern boomed somewhere deep in the mist, its call hollow and mournful, like a drum struck underwater.

    The more he struggled, the faster he sank—chest, shoulder, neck.

    His feet touched bottom. Then his staff followed. He relaxed for a second—then gagged on the thick stench of rot, the bitter tang of sweat and stagnant air, fog pressing against his lips like a foul vapor. Slime flooded his mouth before he could catch a breath. He threw his head back to cry out, but only a gurgling sound escaped.

    With no sun, moon, or stars to guide him, he fixed an invisible point in his mind and pushed toward it.  There was no choice.

    Hours passed.  Maybe days.  He imagined the sun rising and setting.  Again.  And again.  With the fog so thick, there was no way to know.  There was no end.

    The relentless cold of the mire seeped into his bones.  He couldn’t remember warmth.  Not even sunshine.  His legs were lead.  Muscles screamed.  Fatigue pressed down.  Even his eyes sagged with the weight of it.  Each step drained everything he had. 

    Step.  One more.  Just one more.  He inched toward that invisible point.

    If he stopped, he would die. He didn’t care. Couldn’t. Had to. He would just rest his eyes. Just for a second. Light washed over him. And then—everything faded.

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