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Redemption of Eva

Redemption of Eva

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Valley of Humility

September 27, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Wooden steps rose in a straight flight along the entry hall, and just off to one side lay a study.  The air within seemed different—quiet, set apart, as though the world outside had never touched it.  Dark oak paneled the walls, polished smooth by years of care.  A single tall window admitted the light, its clear glass framing a view of the fields beyond, where sheep grazed in peace.

   Seeker set his burden beside a narrow bookshelf.  The few volumes it held were a mismatched collection, their spines worn and frayed—tokens, perhaps, left behind by pilgrims who had passed this way before.  On the lower shelf there was space enough for his own books, waiting for his hand.

    A desk stood ready with a neat stack of paper, a quill, and an inkpot beside it.  Seeker placed his Book upon the desk but kept the Phial pressed close to his heart.  By the hearth waited a great chair—worn yet dignified, its leather softened by generations of pilgrims who had found rest within its arms.  He sank into it, a long breath slipping from his chest—a mingling of relief and gratitude.

    Beautiful stepped into the room, her eyes shining.  “There are three bedrooms—one for us, one for Bright, and one for Wonderful.”

    From down the hall came Bright’s jubilant shout, “Yay!”  His voice rang against the walls, Wonderful’s own cheer rising right after, full of laughter.

    Seeker rose, the warm scent of fresh bread guiding down the hall to the back of the country house.  In the kitchen, a great hearth dominated the room with a wide stone arch.  A small iron door covered the oven.  Near the back door, cords of firewood were stacked neatly, and linen-draped baskets rested in tidy rows.

    Beyond the kitchen, a dining room opened to the side.  Beautiful slipped in beside him, her fingers catching his hand in a playful tug.  “Upstairs, honey.”

    Seeker’s fingers slid along the smooth, time-darkened banister as Beautiful guided him up the narrow stair.  At the top, he stepped into a broad chamber where light streamed through tall windows set on either side.  The ceiling dipped low with the slope of the roof, yet the room felt airy, filled with brightness.

    A long wooden table commanded the center of the room, its surface scarred with age yet worn smooth by countless hands.  Benches flanked either side, their edges rounded by use.  Against the wall stood a basin on a simple stand, a folded cloth laid neatly beside it.

    Along the wall stood three doors, each opening into a bedroom.  One was larger, set with a bed wide enough for two.  The other two were smaller, each holding a single bed.

    Beautiful’s breath caught, her voice dropping to a whisper.  “It’s almost as if this place was built for us.”

***

    The kitchen smelled of smoke and bread so warm it made Wonderful’s tummy grumble, even though she’d already eaten.  The hearth yawned wide—so wide she thought she could almost crawl inside.  Flames leapt and licked the black stones above, alive and playful.  Beside it, a little arched door hid in the wall like a secret cave.  That was where the loaves went in, Mama said, to bake until golden.

    A stack of logs towered taller than she was, and when one popped into the fire she jumped—then giggled.  Dusty flour drifted in the air and settled on the table, where a lump of dough waited beneath a white cloth, rising as if it were breathing.

   Wonderful rose on her tiptoes to peek, fingers itching to press the soft dough, to knead it, to bake bread like Mama.  She was sure she could do better.  She stuck out her tongue at Mama’s back and stifled a giggle.

    Out back lay a small garden.  Mama said each plant meant something.  The sharp smelling sage for wisdom.  Rosemary for remembering.  Basil was sweet, so it must be love.  And parsley for cleansing.  Another way to say “tastes funny,” she decided.  Wonderful didn’t care so much about that.  She just liked leaning close, breathing in their smells.

    Mama chopped carrots and parsley for the stew.  A piece of carrot slipped from the board and spun across the floor.  Merry pounced, snatching it up.  

     “Merry, no!”  Wonderful cried, hands on her hips.

    Bright leaned in the doorway, smirking.  “Puppies can eat carrots.”

   Merry crunched happily, tail thumping, then plopped down with his paws lifted, eyes wide, waiting for the next treasure to fall.

***

    With Seeker and Bright gone to explore, and Wonderful still asleep, Beautiful stood in the garden, the morning sun warm upon her face.

    Tucked just beyond the garden stood a smaller house, simpler but well kept.  Its whitewashed walls had weathered softer beneath years of sun and rain.  Vines curled along the corners, while wildflowers gathered at its base where stone met earth.  The thatched roof dipped lower, humbler than the main house.  Its golden reeds had weathered to straw.  A narrow path, worn smooth, led from the kitchen door to its plain wooden threshold, where the house seemed to wait in quiet welcome.

    A faint whiff of clove drifted past.  Her.  The pain had dulled to an almost imperceptible ache, but it was not gone.  A wave of dizziness swept over her—she nearly sank to the ground.  Then, just as suddenly, it was gone, as if it had never been.

    No—it was cinnamon.  Comfort had returned.  She came across the meadow, waving as she neared.

    “I wasn’t sure you’d come back,” Beautiful said.

    Comfort’s smile widened.  “I brought you something.”  She slipped a hand into her bag and drew out a small parcel, pressing it gently into Beautiful’s hands.

    Beautiful unwrapped the parcel carefully, and the smoky-sweet aroma drifted up.  She gasped, eyes wide.  “Octopus jerky?  I haven’t had this since Bright-Harbor!  The scent alone brings it back!”  She glanced toward the guest house and smiled.  “Are you staying a while?  It’s humble, but you are welcome.”

    They stepped inside together.  The little house held only a single room—plain and spare.  A rough-hewn table stood in the center, and a narrow bed was pressed against the wall.  By the door, a few wooden pegs waited for cloaks or bags, and one small window opened onto the garden outside.

    Comfort’s smile softened as she looked around.  “It’s perfect.”

***

    Bright walked toward the pond, leaning on his staff.  Sheep grazed quietly along the water’s edge, their noses dipping now and then into the ripples.  Then without warning, the meadow erupted.  Sheep scattered, bleating in terror, their hooves drumming the earth like thunder.  Bright’s chest clenched, his heart slamming hard against his ribs.  From the dark mountains to the west, a black shape surged into view—huge, hulking, fur bristling, a roar tearing the air apart.

    A bear.

    It barreled toward the flock, eyes locked, claws ripping furrows in the earth.  One ewe stumbled, legs tangling beneath her.  She bleated in panic, stranded in the open.  The bear swung toward her, jaws gaping, teeth glinting white.

    Bright didn’t think—he couldn’t.  His staff was already clenched in his grip, and his legs were moving before his mind caught up.  He tore across the meadow, breath burning in his throat, reckless, unstoppable.

    “Hey!” he shouted, his voice cracking with a mix of fear and fury.  He lifted the staff high over his head, hands trembling, and bellowed again, “Leave her!”

    The bear wheeled at the sound, its massive head snapping toward him.  A growl rumbled through the earth itself, yet Bright planted his feet.  He clutched the staff in both hands, palms slick with sweat, refusing to let go. 

    Bright swung with all his strength, the staff cracking down on the bear’s nose with a solid thump.  The beast froze, stunned, then dropped back on its haunches.  A pitiful whimper broke from its throat before it bolted, crashing toward the dark mountains.

    Bright sank beneath a tree, his legs quivering too hard to hold him.  He held the staff against his chest and tried to steady his breath.  Slowly, the trembling eased.  A tune slipped through his lips, soft at first, then steadier, threading through the meadow like a breeze.  One by one, the sheep wandered back, their bleating quieting.  They circled close and settled around him, wool brushing his knees, until he sat enclosed in their calm.

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Filed Under: Bright

The Prince’s Country House

September 25, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Seeker hoisted his burden onto his shoulders.  Strangely, it felt lighter than it should have.  He wore new clothes—Beautiful’s handiwork, stitched with her own hands to replace his worn-out rags.  He tucked the Book and his phial close to his heart.  Then they set out.  Beautiful walked at one side, Bright on the other, staff in hand, while Merry bounded ahead with Wonderful chasing after.   

    Comfort had taken her leave to visit her father and promised to meet them farther along the Way.

    The way down the other side of the mountain was steep—perhaps steeper than the climb up—so they stepped carefully, mindful not to slip.

    “Is it called the Valley of Humiliation—or the Valley of Humility?” Bright asked.

    “In my Book it’s Humiliation,” Seeker said.  “That’s where Christian fought Apollyon.  But in your mother’s Book, it’s called Humility. Christiana and her sons had a far better time than Christian did—they even stayed at Prince Emmanuel’s country house.  That’s where we’re going.”

    “No,” Beautiful said, shaking her head.  “They didn’t stay there—it’s only mentioned.  And in my Book, it’s definitely Humiliation too.”

    “Then why do you call it Humility, Dad?” Bright pressed, looking up at him.

   Seeker shrugged.  “Maybe it was Redemption of Eva.  She didn’t just face Apollyon—she went after the Dragon too, chasing him down into the depths of Hell itself.”

    Wonderful darted up, clutching a lily high for Beautiful.

    Beautiful’s smile softened.  “Thank you, Wonderful.”

   Seeker nodded at the bloom.  “The Prince’s favorite.  They grow wild all through the Valley.  He loves the place so dearly that He gives an allowance to keep a house there—so pilgrims may always find welcome.

    Bright’s grin broke wide.  “I hope it’s nicer than Mama’s Palace.”

    They reached the bottom without a slip.  Seeker and Bright looked around, searching.  No scarred earth, no gashes in the ground, no blood-stained stones—no monument at all to mark some great battle with monsters or dragons.

    Seeker only shrugged.  “It’s been a very long time.”

    At last, they reached a narrow footbridge over a stream winding calm and clear across the valley.  Seeker breathed deep—the air was sweet, the soil smelled rich.  Fields stretched lush and green before them, lilies scattered across the grass, their white petals dipping and swaying in the breeze.

    They followed the stream into the heart of the Valley, where its waters gathered into a deep, still pond, the surface mirroring the sky.  Sheep grazed along the banks, pausing now and then to lower their heads and drink, their movements unhurried, untroubled.

    There it stood—a country house, modest yet stately.  Its whitewashed walls gleamed in the sun; their brightness softened by ivy curling in gentle green along the stone.  A golden thatched roof sloped low, as though bowing toward the meadows.  Windows latticed with leaded glass caught the light and scattered it across the grass.  Fruit trees bordered the garden, branches heavy with apples and pears, while roses clung to the fence, sweetening the air with fragrance.

    A wide oak door, darkened with age and polished by countless hands, stood before them.  Across its face were carved the words:  Welcome, weary pilgrims.

    “I think we’re home,” Seeker said.

   Beautiful gave a quiet nod.  Bright’s grin spread wide.  Wonderful bounced on her toes, and Merry answered with a sharp, joyous yelp.

Filed Under: Bright

Bright — Chapter 3

September 25, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

  Unlike Bright, Wonderful was a fussy baby.  She wailed for every reason—and for none at all—her piercing cries echoing through the cave.

    Bright filled the days playing with her, talking to her as if she understood every word.  She surprised them all when she pulled herself upright, stumbled into her first steps, and soon found her voice.

    “Wonderful, look!” Bright called.

    “No!” Wonderful shot back, her favorite word as sharp as her cry.

    When Seeker ventured from the cave, he found the giant gone.  The camp lay deserted, as if it hadn’t been touched in days—perhaps weeks.  He searched the rocky slope, even walked down to the Arbor, but there was no trace.  Giant Wrath had vanished.

    When Seeker told Beautiful, she let out a long sigh of relief.  “It’s so boring here.  I’d give anything for a bowl of Miss Cheerful’s stew again.”  She chuckled, the sound soft but genuine.

   Seeker checked again and again over the next few days.  Only when he and Beautiful were certain that Wrath was truly gone did they resolve to continue the climb to Palace Beautiful, gathering up their few belongings to set out once more.

    Seeker hefted the burden onto his back and gripped his staff.  Beautiful cradled Wonderful in her arms, while Comfort took Bright by the hand.

    “Walk!” demanded Wonderful, wriggling in Beautiful’s arms.  “Walk!”

    With a small shrug, Beautiful set her down.  Wonderful darted up the trail, then stopped to scoop up a pebble, staring it in wide-eyed wonder.

    Beautiful reached for her hand.  

    “No!”  Wonderful yanked free and scampered a few steps ahead.  She bent to snatch up another pebble and held it high.  “Look, Bright!”

    “Wonderful.”  Beautiful let out a sigh, half tired, half amused.  “If you’re going to walk, then walk—don’t stop for every pretty rock along the way.”

    Wonderful darted ahead and stopped again.  From a crack in the stone a daisy grew, small and stubborn.  She plucked it and lifted it high.  “Here, Mama!”

    Soon Wonderful grew weary and stretched out her arms.  Beautiful gathered her onto her hip.  “Will this hill never end?” she muttered.

   Seeker swiped the sweat from his brow and nodded toward the rise ahead.  “I think that’s the top.”

    “You said that the last time,” Beautiful shot back.

    Bright stuck out his bottom lip, while Wonderful had already slipped into sleep against her mother’s shoulder.

    To pass the time, Seeker told Bright about Palace Beautiful from his Book.  Other than the Delectable Mountains, it was the loveliest place in the land.  He spoke of the lions, too, cautioning, “Remember—they’re chained.  They’re only there to test how brave you are.”

    “I’m brave, Daddy!” Bright exclaimed.

    Seeker nodded, a faint smile tugging at his lips.  “Yes, Bright.  Yes, you are.”

    Gradually tufts of grass broke through the stones, and the path began to level.  Beautiful’s face lit up.  “We did it!” she gasped between ragged breaths.

    To the left of the way stood a small thicket of trees and a low wall of rough-hewn stone enclosing a narrow plot of land.  Seeker set down his burden, and Beautiful eased herself to the ground, leaning back against a tree with Wonderful nestled in her lap.  Bright sank beside her, pressing close.

    Seeker pushed open the wrought-iron gate and stepped inside.  Five headstones.  Five names.  His heart sank—he didn’t need to read them to know.  He knelt at the first stone.  Watchful.   He swallowed hard.  Discretion.  Prudence.  Piety.  Charity.

    He rose slowly, gave the stones one last lingering look, then turned away.  Back at the gate, he trudged to his burden and heaved it onto his back.  Bright had dozed off; Comfort gathered him gently into her arms.

    “What is it?”  Beautiful asked, shifting Wonderful higher on her shoulder as she stood.

    Seeker only shook his head.  He could not bring himself to speak.

    When they reached the clearing, Palace Beautiful rose before them.  Its red-brick walls and pale cornerstones stood weathered and crumbling.  Stairs climbed to an arched entry, where white stone columns still held beneath the weight of centuries—edges worn but unbroken.  Above, the roof had long since fallen, leaving jagged teeth of masonry biting into the sky.

    “Of course,” Seeker said.  “Everything changes.  No Watchful.  No Charity.”

    Beautiful only stared.

    “Come, my love,” he murmured.  “There may be a cottage nearby.”

    Seeker was right.  Just around the bend stood a timber-framed cottage, much like the one they had stayed in near the Interpreter’s house.  But no smoke curled from the chimney, and no voices drifted from within.  Seeker strode to the door and rapped his knuckles against the wood.  Then he knocked again, harder.

    A well-dressed man opened the door.  His face was kind, framed by graying hair, his build still strong though softened with age.  There was a trace of swagger in the way he carried himself.

    Beautiful lifted her eyes to him and smiled.  “We are pilgrims on the Narrow Way,” she said.  “We’re looking for a place to stay for a season.”

   He looked kindly at Beautiful, Bright, and Wonderful.  Then Seeker felt the man’s gaze rake over him—his shabby, sweat-drenched clothes, torn and patched.  The heavy burden dragging at his shoulders.  At last, the man’s eyes fixed on the dark bruise that still marred Seeker’s forehead after more than a year.  Fear flickered across his face.

    “I’m sorry,” he said, his glance darting back at Seeker, “I can spare provisions, but there’s no room here.”

    They lingered a few minutes more, but when the door finally shut, lightning flashed in Beautiful’s eyes.  “No room,” she scoffed.  “Half the house is empty.  No room!”  She huffed, sharp and indignant.

    Seeker set his burden down and sank onto the Palace steps.  From the satchel he drew his pipe.  He had to think.  He needed a plan.  But he was tired—so tired.  And beneath the weariness, the old ire was beginning to stir.

   Seeker’s thoughts swarmed, relentless as flies.  Watchful gone.  Palace Beautiful in ruins.  He had considered the possibility.  But he had been sure there would be a cottage.  And there was—only they had been turned away.  Because of him.

   He pulled out his pouch, idly filled the pipe’s bowl, and tamped it down with his thumb.  Flint struck steel, sparks catching until the tobacco smoldered, a thin curl of smoke rising.

    The ruins were no place for a baby—least of all Wonderful.  And it was far too late to start down the other side.  And there was no guarantee anyone would take them in at the bottom.  He wanted to march back and tell the man at the cottage exactly what he thought of him.

    Beautiful scoffed.  “Smoking again, Seeker?”

    “I have to think,” he said.

   “When are you going to quit?”

   “Not now, Beautiful,” he growled, pipe clenched tight between his teeth.

    “Daddy, what you doing?” Bright asked.

    “You’re being a bad influence on Bright,” she snapped.

    “All right!” he snapped.  He drew hard on the pipe, then banged it twice against the stair, scattering ash and tobacco across the stone.  A jolt shot through him—he froze.  “Beautiful!”

    Lightning flashed in her eyes.  “What?” she demanded.  Behind her, Giant Wrath loomed.  Seeker lunged for his staff.  Beautiful whirled, terror breaking across her face.  Wrath struck—one shove, and she went sprawling.  She hit the ground hard and lay motionless.

    Seeker charged and swung his staff with all his strength.  The blow landed solid—but Wrath didn’t even flinch.  It was nothing to him.  The giant’s fist came down like a hammer, slamming Seeker’s chest.  His breath vanished in a rush, and the world spun as he was hurled backward, crashing to the ground.

   Red bled at the edges of his vision.  He rolled to his side, fighting for air.  The old bruise flared, pounding in rhythm with his heartbeat.  Wonderful’s wail split the air.  Out of the corner of his eye, Comfort snatched Wonderful and darted into the ruined Palace.

    The giant fixed him with a stare, contempt burning in his eyes.  Then he turned away, lumbering toward Beautiful.  Bright planted his feet, Seeker’s staff gripped in both hands, barring the way.

    “You,” the giant sneered.  “You think you can protect her?”  With a flick of his massive hand, he swatted Bright aside as though he were nothing.  The boy hit the ground hard and burst into sobs.

   Seeker lunged, driving his fist into the giant’s leg with all his weight behind it.  Pain shot through his hand, white-hot.  The giant’s flesh was harder than the mill’s stone wall.

    Giant Wrath seized him and lifted him high.  Seeker thrashed, straining to break free, but the giant only bounded toward the palace.  With a brutal swing, he slammed Seeker against a stone pillar.  Blinding pain ripped through his arm as the pillar cracked—and his bone snapped with it.

   Giant Wrath howled in glee and hurled Seeker to the ground.  He struggled to rise, but the giant’s club smashed into his side, a rib giving way with a crack.  Another blow followed, then another.  Seeker curled tight, arms over his head, as the strikes rained down.  Darkness swallowed him.

***

    Beautiful pushed up onto her elbow, heart pounding.  Helpless, she watched as Giant Wrath’s blows rained down on Seeker, each one thudding through her chest as if she’d been struck herself.  At last, the giant grunted in grim satisfaction.  His eyes cut to her—a mocking, lingering glance—before he turned and lumbered off.

    “Seeker?” Her cry broke from her throat as she stumbled forward, pain lancing up her back.  She dropped to her knees beside him.  His eyes were shut, his body slack.  “Seeker!” The word came out as a gasp.  She bent low, pressing her ear to his lips.  A whisper of breath touched her skin—slow, faint, but there.

   Panic surged through her.  Wonderful?  Bright?  Her gaze darted wildly in the fading light until she found him—Bright, sprawled on the ground, Seeker’s staff clutched tight in his small hands.  She rushed to his side.

   Bright pushed himself upright, wincing.  “Mama… my foot hurts.”

   Beautiful caught him up in her arms, clutching him tight.  “Oh, Bright.  Oh, my Bright.”  Her voice broke into sobs.

   Comfort appeared on the stairs with Wonderful in her arms—somehow, she had soothed her cries.  Beautiful’s gaze darted from Bright to Comfort.

   “Go,” Comfort urged.  She bent toward Bright.  “Come into the palace with your sister.  You’ll be safe there.”

    Beautiful dropped to her knees beside Seeker, resting a trembling hand on his chest.  She breathed a prayer to the King. “Please keep him safe.  Keep him alive.”  Then she rose and sprinted toward the cottage with all the strength left in her.

    A faint light flickered in the window.  She pounded on the door.  No answer.  She struck it again, harder.  Still silence.  Her hand seized the latch—locked.  She hammered with all her strength, voice breaking in her chest.  Please… please, answer.

   At last, a woman’s voice drifted through the door.  “We can’t help you.  Go away.”

   “Please,” Beautiful cried, “Seeker needs help!”

   The light inside flickered—and went dark.  She was left in silence, in shadow.  Her knees buckled.  She crumpled to the ground, tears spilling hot down her cheeks.  “Oh, Almighty King,” she whispered, broken.  “I beg You—please… help us.”

    Seeker woke aching from head to heel.  His eyes were puffed near shut, his skull pounding with every heartbeat.  His right wrist was bound in a crude splint—two sticks strapped tight with bandages; the bone set beneath.

    He pushed himself upright on the straw mattress, a wheeze tearing from his chest, ribs protesting.  The musty air of the ruined palace closed in around him.  Two walls leaned half-crumbled, the roof long gone.  Yet enough of the ceiling clung stubbornly overhead to offer a scrap of shelter, should the rain come.

    Bright perched beside the bed, a storybook open in his lap.  His head shot up.  “Daddy!” he cried.  “Daddy’s awake!”

    “Daddy!”  Wonderful echoed from across the room, her little voice bright.

   Beautiful stepped through the doorway, eyes shining.  She swept her hand wide.  “Welcome to House Beautiful,” she said.

    “Don’t make me laugh,” Seeker groaned, pressing a hand to his ribs.  Yet a chuckle slipped out anyway.  “How long… how long have I been out?”

    “You had us worried,” Beautiful said, a faint crease between her brows.  “Three days.  It’s a miracle you’re still alive after what Wrath did to you.”

    “How… how did you manage?” Seeker stammered.

   “I went to the cottage, but they turned me away.”  She drew a slow breath.  “So, I did what I could.”

    Seeker groaned, bracing as he pushed himself upright.  Pain flared in his ribs.  Beautiful’s hand came down on his shoulder, steady but firm.  She shook her head.

   “You need to rest.  I’ll bring you something—” her mouth twitched “—well something you can eat.”

    Seeker ate the bread Beautiful set before him, then pushed to his feet and swung his satchel over his shoulder.

   “Seeker—” she began, protest sharp in her tone.

   He cut her off, voice firm.  “We have to be ready if he comes back.”

    Bright walked beside him with a slight limp, and together they explored the palace.  

    “I’m sorry, Bright,” Seeker said.  “Did the giant hurt you badly?”

    “Bright put on a brave face but nodded.  “He hurt my foot.”

   “We have to find the armory, Bright.  My staff—the Staff of Opinions—has no effect on him.  With armor and a sword, we might stand a chance.”

    Together they picked their way through the rubble, weeds pushing through the cracks, nettles choking the corners, birds nesting in the hollowed niches.  Time had not been kind to Palace Beautiful.

    As they searched, Seeker told Bright how Christian had once been outfitted with sword and shield, breastplate and helmet—how he’d fought Apollyon for days and, in the end, sent him fleeing.

    They moved down what remained of the main hall.  Near the entrance, the doorway to a side room was blocked with rubble.  Seeker set to work, slowly clearing the way through.

   Bright tugged at his sleeve.  “Daddy, can I have a sword, too?”

   Seeker gave a faint smile.  “We’ll see, Bright.  We’ll see.”

    With the way cleared, Seeker stepped inside, Bright scrambling behind him.  His guess had been right—this had been the armory.  But only ghosts remained where racks once held weapons and mannequins bore armor.  Worm-ridden fragments of wood littered the ground, and scattered pieces lay strewn across the floor.  

    A sword jutted half-buried in the rubble.  Seeker flexed his fingers—thankful the giant it was his off-hand the giant had broken.  He gripped the hilt and pulled it free.  The blade’s surface was mottled with a coat of brown-red.

    The hilt felt firm in his hand.  He swung it in a sharp downward cut.  The blade, brittle after centuries of neglect, sheared off mid-swing.  Bright flinched.  Seeker stared at the jagged stump, stunned.

    A shield lay on the floor, faint etchings of a cross still visible.  Seeker nudged it with his boot; it rang hollow.  But when he set his weight on it, the shield crumbled to dust.

   This had been the armory.  Now it was the graveyard of one.

   “We’ll have to find another way, Bright.”

   Bright only nodded.

***

    Seeker sat beneath a tree on the bluff, staring out over the Forest of Danger.  The woods stretched below him, dark and endless, their canopy rolling like a sea of green until it dissolved into shadow.

    He took out his pipe, turning it over in his hands, but left it empty.  Closing his eyes, he breathed a prayer to the King.

    “Keep my Beautiful, Bright, and Wonderful safe from Giant Wrath,” he whispered.  “I have no weapon to stand against him, and we have no place to hide.”

    Fatigue pressed down on him until his head began to nod.  Drowsiness blurred the edges of his thoughts, and he slipped into a waking dream.

    In the dream, a Shining One descended from the heavens—head and shoulders taller than any man.  His robes of green and gold rippled like living light.  Four mighty wings arched from his back, shimmering in hues of green, gold, and white.

    In his hands he bore a staff, a serpent coiled around its length, two wings outspread at the top.  His face was gentle, radiant with compassion, framed by flowing auburn hair.  His eyes shone like emerald fire.

    “Greetings, Seeker-for-Truth,” he said.  His voice rang deep and resonant, like a great bell borne on the wind.  Each word fell clear and deliberate, flowing with the ease of water over polished stone.

    Seeker trembled, the brilliance searing his eyes.  He dropped to the ground, face pressed to the earth, as if struck lifeless.  Then a hand, firm yet tender touched his own.  Power surged through him, steadying his knees as the Shining One lifted him upright.

    “Do not fear,” the voice rang—deep, clear, carrying like music on the wind.  “Your prayer has been heard.  I am sent to help you.”

    “My lord,” Seeker pleaded, his voice raw, “will you stand with me against Wrath?  I have no sword, no armor.  My body is bruised and broken, and the staff I carry is worthless in my hand.”

    The Shining One answered, each word ringing with measured weight: “Hear the words of the King:  steel and shield are but vanity before Wrath.  Only forgiveness has the power to undo him.”

    “Teach me this forgiveness,” Seeker whispered, his voice trembling—yet laced with a fragile thread of hope.

    “Day by day, you have fed Wrath’s strength.  When Beautiful yawned at your wedding.  When Jabal twisted his terms—each moment gave him ground.  And when Wrath rises, no weapon of yours can strike him down.”

   “But I don’t know how,” Seeker whispered.  His throat tightened.  “There are wounds I cannot forgive.”

    “It is not you who forgives—but you must yield to it.  If you strike Wrath, he will only swell in power.  But if you release forgiveness with tears, he will flee.”

    The Shining One placed a small phial in Seeker’s hands.  His voice rang clear: “Not one tear of yours has fallen in vain.  The King has gathered them all, and here they are kept—every drop held in this vessel.”

    The Shining One clasped Seeker’s hand.  A warmth coursed through him, loosening the ache in his body, steadying the beat of his heart.  “Peace be upon you, and upon your house,” the angel said, each word resonant as a bell toll.  Then the light faded, and he was gone.

    Seeker woke with a start.  What a curious dream.  Yet in his hand lay the crystal phial.  He lifted it, and at the bottom two—perhaps three—teardrops glimmered.  His hand went to his ribs.  No pain.  Carefully he unwound the splint and flexed his fingers.  Whole.  Healed.

***

    Beautiful leaned against Seeker as the firelight flickered across his face.  Bright played on the floor with Wonderful, their laughter carrying softly through the chamber.  Somehow, Seeker’s bones had mended—yet he offered her no explanation.  She didn’t press him.  Her eyes lingered on the bruise still dark across his forehead—horrible, stubborn, ugly, refusing to fade.

    From the darkness beyond the ruins, heavy footsteps thundered through the night.

   “He can’t get in,” she whispered, though a shiver still raced down her spine.

    The footsteps drew closer—then a thunderous slam shook the walls.  Another crash, and the stone crumbled.  Giant Wrath forced his way inside.  Bright screamed.  Wonderful wailed.  Beautiful froze where she stood, her body shrinking back, powerless before him.

    Seeker rose to his feet and walked straight toward Giant Wrath, every step measured, unhurried.  A flicker of confusion crossed the giant’s face.

    “You have no power here,” Seeker said, his voice calm.

    Wrath barked a contemptuous laugh and hefted his club high.  “Funny man,” he sneered. 

    Seeker reached into his jacket and drew out the phial, lifting it high.  A brilliant light burst forth, flooding the ruins brighter than day.  Wrath staggered back, his club clattering from his hand as he crashed to the ground, hands thrown over his eyes.

    Seeker stepped forward.

    “No…” Wrath gasped.

    “Go—and never return,” Seeker said, raising the phial high.

    The giant reeled to his feet, howling in agony, then turned and fled, vanishing into the night.

***

    Now I saw in my dream that Seeker and his family dwelt for a season in Palace Beautiful, and in those years Bright and Wonderful grew.  During that time Giant Wrath made no attempt to trouble them.

    Wonderful tugged at Beautiful’s dress, eyes wide with pleading.  “I want a guinea pig, Mama.  Can I have a guinea pig?”

   “Mm-hmm,” Beautiful murmured, distracted.  Then the words sank in.  “Go ask your daddy.”   A guinea pig?  Where in the world did she think they’d find a guinea pig here?  And how did she even know about guinea pigs, anyway?

    Wonderful burst into the next room, hair flying.  “Daddy!  Daddy!  Mama said I can have a guinea pig.  Can I?  Can I, please?”

    “What would you even do with a guinea pig, Wonderful?” Seeker asked.

    Beautiful peeked in through the doorway as Wonderful scrambled onto his lap and wrapped her arms tight around his neck.

   “I’m gonna take him on walks!  And feed him!  And give him baths!”

    “Can you even do that with…” Seeker wrinkled his nose “guinea pigs?”

    Wonderful tossed her head back, giggling.  “Daddy, do you even know what guinea pigs are?”

    Seeker laughed with her.  “You got me, Wonderful.”

    Beautiful couldn’t help but smile.

    “And just where are you going to find a guinea pig?”

    “Just believe, Daddy.”  She slid off his lap and bolted toward the palace entrance.

    An hour slipped by with no sign of Wonderful.  Too quiet—that always meant trouble.  Beautiful sighed and rose, heading out to look for her.  

    Just outside the palace, Wonderful stood holding up a puppy, proudly displaying him to Bright.  His eyes went wide.

    “That’s not a guinea pig, Wonderful!” he exclaimed.

    The puppy was small and impossibly cute, his brown fur offset by a black muzzle and nose.  But it was his ears that caught Beautiful’s breath—huge, upright, and far too large for his tiny body.

    Beautiful hurried over, reaching Wonderful just as Seeker leaned out the palace doorway.  “Where did you find that puppy?” she asked.

    “Not telling.”  She lifted her chin, nose tilted high.  “It’s a secret.  And his name is Prince William Faithful Great-Heart.”

    “Ridiculous,” scoffed Beautiful. 

    But Wonderful plopped the puppy into her hands.  His soft brown eyes lifted to hers, and a tiny pink tongue darted out to lick her finger.   Beautiful’s lips curved despite herself.  Her heart was lost.

    “We’ll call him Merry.”

   Wonderful stomped her foot.  “I didn’t want a Merry—I wanted a guinea pig!”

   Laughter burst from them all, and Merry only wagged his tail harder.

    When Bright woke, Mama and Wonderful were still fast asleep, Merry curled in a ball at their side.  Daddy was already off to work.  That was fine—Wonderful had been too annoying to play with lately, anyway.

    He’d searched through the ruins of the armory but hadn’t found a thing worth playing with.  A dagger would’ve been perfect—something to practice fighting with.  Daddy always walked the opposite way of the rising sun, past the cottage.  He never said what he did out there, and Mama never asked.  Bright had never explored that side of the mountain either.  Today seemed as good a day as any to find out.

    He quickened his pace as the cottage came into view.  The kids in Delight had been mean—but here, they were twice as bad.  He let out a breath of relief when no one came out to bother him.

    Ahead stretched an orchard of strange fruit.  They looked like small, unripe plums—only they seemed to glow, pale and tempting.  His stomach rumbled.  He hadn’t eaten before slipping out of the palace, and the sight of them made his mouth water.

   If Daddy worked here—and Bright was sure he did—then the fruit had to be good.  Why else would anyone keep an orchard of them?  They wouldn’t miss just one.  He reached up to a low branch and plucked one free.

    He rubbed the fruit on his tunic and took a bite.  It hit his tongue sharp and sweet at once—strange but wonderful.  A tingle shot down his spine, warmth spreading through his head.  Maybe just one more.  He plucked another, then another, until he lost count.

    When his belly was full, he started back toward the palace.  Maybe he’d eaten one too many.  A dull ache throbbed in his gut.  And unless it was his imagination, the ankle he twisted when Giant Wrath had hurled him down was beginning to throb again.

***

    Seeker’s work for the day was done.  In the morning, he had pruned the trees.  Afterward, he filled the small crates and hauled them to the cottage, dropping them off before returning with the empties.  Most bore the same ornate M stamped on the wood.  Now and then he noticed another mark—the curved smile of Delight.

    It wasn’t the work he would have chosen, but it earned just enough to keep food on the table.  He hadn’t hidden it from Beautiful—exactly.  The chance to explain had simply never come.  And she had never asked.

    The man from the cottage who’d hired him said nobles in Vanity paid dearly for a single fruit.  It had become a kind of sport—a dare to see how many one could eat before the sickness set in.  He never touched them himself, and other people’s folly was none of his concern.  Besides, Companion had said the fruit wasn’t evil in itself.

    He always handed his wages to Beautiful, who bought provisions from the peddler that passed every week or so.  Now and then the haulers slipped him a tip, and that kept his pipe pouch from running empty.

–

    When he came home, Beautiful was pacing, worry etched across her face.  “Bright’s had a terrible stomachache all day.”

    “Did you try—” He cut himself off.  No need to finish.  Of course, no one at the cottage would have helped.

    Inside, Bright lay sprawled on the bed, moaning.  His face was ashen, foam gathering at his lips, fingers clutching tight into the blanket.  Beautiful gasped, tears spilling down her cheeks.

    Seeker pressed his palm to Bright’s forehead—it burned like fire.  He clasped his son’s hand, and something slipped loose, rolling onto the blanket.  His breath caught.  A small, luminous fruit.

    “Oh no.”

   “What is it?” Beautiful asked.

  “We have to make him vomit—now.” His voice came out harsh.

   “What?” she said again, eyes wide.

   “It’s the fruit,” he choked out.  “From Beelzebub’s garden.”

    “I don’t have anything,” Beautiful said, her voice sharp with panic.  “Let me see if Comfort has anything.”

    Seeker’s tears spilled unchecked, pattering onto Bright’s skin.  Bitterness welled up in his chest, choking him.  This was his fault—if only he had stopped to think.

    After what felt like hours, Beautiful reappeared.  “She has bitter herbs.”  She rested a hand on Bright’s chest.  “Hold on, my Bright.”

    The moments dragged, heavy and endless, until Comfort burst in, a cup clutched in her hand, steam curling bitter and sharp from its rim.  She pressed it into Beautiful’s waiting grasp.

    Seeker lifted Bright carefully, cradling him upright.  Beautiful pressed the cup to his lips, tilting it with trembling hands.

    Wonderful padded in, clutching Merry to her chest, “Daddy, why does Bright’s tummy hurt?”

    Seeker lifted the small, glowing fruit in his hand.  “Because of these.  They made him sick.  Never eat them, Wonderful.”

   She shook her head hard.  “I don’t want a tummy ache.”

    Comfort slipped in, gently took her by the shoulder and guided her back out.

    Bright lurched upright, his body heaving.  Seeker scooped him from the bed and set him on the floor, steadying him with a hand on his back.  The retching came hard and fast—sour, dark bile spilling out, laced with a sickly-sweet stench that turned Seeker’s stomach.

    Almost at once, color crept back into Bright’s cheeks.  He wiped his mouth with the back of his hand.  “My leg hurts,” he murmured, easing himself upright.  He limped toward the bed, dragging his foot with each step.

    Comfort reappeared with another cup.  “Here, Bright,” she said gently.  “Drink this warm salt water—it will help you feel better.”

    They cleaned the floor, wiped Bright’s brow with a damp cloth, and tucked him back into bed.  “Sleep now, Bright,” Beautiful whispered.

   Merry bounded into the room, tail wagging, and leapt onto the bed.  He licked Bright’s face until the boy laughed weakly and pulled him close.  With a happy sigh, Merry curled against him.

–

    Beautiful’s eyes burned into him.  He’d known this was coming.

    “Where did he get that fruit?”

   Seeker swallowed.  “From the orchard—past the cottage.  That’s where I’ve been working.”

    “And you never thought to tell me?  To tell us?”  Her voice shook, anger and hurt tangled together.  “What’s happening to you, Seeker?  I thought you had changed.”

    “I never hid it from you, Beautiful.  You never asked.  How else was I supposed to buy our food?  Besides—it wasn’t hurting anyone.”

   “Not hurting anyone?”  Beautiful’s scoff cut sharp.  “Not hurting anyone.  Ridiculous.”

    Fire flashed in her eyes.  “This is your fault.  You did this to my son.”  She spun on her heel and stormed out of the room.

    Seeker felt the old ire stirring—the same fury that had once summoned Giant Wrath.  The Shining One’s words came back to him.  He muttered under his breath, “I don’t know how to forgive… or even if I deserve to.  But I allow it.”  A single tear slipped down his cheek.

***

    The next morning Bright was up and moving, though his limp was plain to see.  Merry bounded at his heels, tail wagging furiously.   Beautiful’s eyes flickered toward Seeker, sharp with unspoken blame.

    Seeker gripped his staff and stepped to Bright.  “Son,” he said quietly, “I’ve carried this from the beginning of my journey.”  He placed it in Bright’s hands.  “It’s yours now.  Lean on it when you walk.”

    Bright turned it over, testing the weight.  Then he crossed the floor, leaning on it with each step.  A smile broke across his face.  “Thank you, Dad.”

–

    Seeker took Beautiful’s hand.  She gave a faint tug to pull away, but he held fast.

   “I’m sorry, baby,” he said at last.

   She only nodded, silent.

   “I think…” he drew a breath, steadying himself, “we’ve stayed here long enough.  It’s time to continue our journey.”

   Her eyes softened.  She nodded again.  “Yes.  Let’s continue our journey.”

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The Orchard of Bitter Fruit

September 23, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    When Bright woke, Mama and Wonderful were still fast asleep, Merry curled in a ball at their side.  Daddy was already off to work.  That was fine—Wonderful had been too annoying to play with lately, anyway.

    He’d searched through the ruins of the armory but hadn’t found a thing worth playing with.  A dagger would’ve been perfect—something to practice fighting with.  Daddy always walked the opposite way of the rising sun, past the cottage.  He never said what he did out there, and Mama never asked.  Bright had never explored that side of the mountain either.  Today seemed as good a day as any to find out.

    He quickened his pace as the cottage came into view.  The kids in Delight had been mean—but here, they were twice as bad.  He let out a breath of relief when no one came out to bother him.

    Ahead stretched an orchard of strange fruit.  They looked like small, unripe plums—only they seemed to glow, pale and tempting.  His stomach rumbled.  He hadn’t eaten before slipping out of the palace, and the sight of them made his mouth water.

   If Daddy worked here—and Bright was sure he did—then the fruit had to be good.  Why else would anyone keep an orchard of them?  They wouldn’t miss just one.  He reached up to a low branch and plucked one free.

    He rubbed the fruit on his tunic and took a bite.  It hit his tongue sharp and sweet at once—strange but wonderful.  A tingle shot down his spine, warmth spreading through his head.  Maybe just one more.  He plucked another, then another, until he lost count.

    When his belly was full, he started back toward the palace.  Maybe he’d eaten one too many.  A dull ache throbbed in his gut.  And unless it was his imagination, the ankle he twisted when Giant Wrath had hurled him down was beginning to throb again.

***

    Seeker’s work for the day was done.  In the morning, he had pruned the trees.  Afterward, he filled the small crates and hauled them to the cottage, dropping them off before returning with the empties.  Most bore the same ornate M stamped on the wood.  Now and then he noticed another mark—the curved smile of Delight.

    It wasn’t the work he would have chosen, but it earned just enough to keep food on the table.  He hadn’t hidden it from Beautiful—exactly.  The chance to explain had simply never come.  And she had never asked.

    The man from the cottage who’d hired him said nobles in Vanity paid dearly for a single fruit.  It had become a kind of sport—a dare to see how many one could eat before the sickness set in.  He never touched them himself, and other people’s folly was none of his concern.  Besides, Companion had said the fruit wasn’t evil in itself.

    He always handed his wages to Beautiful, who bought provisions from the peddler that passed every week or so.  Now and then the haulers slipped him a tip, and that kept his pipe pouch from running empty.

–

    When he came home, Beautiful was pacing, worry etched across her face.  “Bright’s had a terrible stomachache all day.”

    “Did you try—” He cut himself off.  No need to finish.  Of course, no one at the cottage would have helped.

    Inside, Bright lay sprawled on the bed, moaning.  His face was ashen, foam gathering at his lips, fingers clutching tight into the blanket.  Beautiful gasped, tears spilling down her cheeks.

    Seeker pressed his palm to Bright’s forehead—it burned like fire.  He clasped his son’s hand, and something slipped loose, rolling onto the blanket.  His breath caught.  A small, luminous fruit.

    “Oh no.”

   “What is it?” Beautiful asked.

  “We have to make him vomit—now.” His voice came out harsh.

   “What?” she said again, eyes wide.

   “It’s the fruit,” he choked out.  “From Beelzebub’s garden.”

    “I don’t have anything,” Beautiful said, her voice sharp with panic.  “Let me see if Comfort has anything.”

    Seeker’s tears spilled unchecked, pattering onto Bright’s skin.  Bitterness welled up in his chest, choking him.  This was his fault—if only he had stopped to think.

    After what felt like hours, Beautiful reappeared.  “She has bitter herbs.”  She rested a hand on Bright’s chest.  “Hold on, my Bright.”

    The moments dragged, heavy and endless, until Comfort burst in, a cup clutched in her hand, steam curling bitter and sharp from its rim.  She pressed it into Beautiful’s waiting grasp.

    Seeker lifted Bright carefully, cradling him upright.  Beautiful pressed the cup to his lips, tilting it with trembling hands.

    Wonderful padded in, clutching Merry to her chest, “Daddy, why does Bright’s tummy hurt?”

    Seeker lifted the small, glowing fruit in his hand.  “Because of these.  They made him sick.  Never eat them, Wonderful.”

   She shook her head hard.  “I don’t want a tummy ache.”

    Comfort slipped in, gently took her by the shoulder and guided her back out.

    Bright lurched upright, his body heaving.  Seeker scooped him from the bed and set him on the floor, steadying him with a hand on his back.  The retching came hard and fast—sour, dark bile spilling out, laced with a sickly-sweet stench that turned Seeker’s stomach.

    Almost at once, color crept back into Bright’s cheeks.  He wiped his mouth with the back of his hand.  “My leg hurts,” he murmured, easing himself upright.  He limped toward the bed, dragging his foot with each step.

    Comfort reappeared with another cup.  “Here, Bright,” she said gently.  “Drink this warm salt water—it will help you feel better.”

    They cleaned the floor, wiped Bright’s brow with a damp cloth, and tucked him back into bed.  “Sleep now, Bright,” Beautiful whispered.

   Merry bounded into the room, tail wagging, and leapt onto the bed.  He licked Bright’s face until the boy laughed weakly and pulled him close.  With a happy sigh, Merry curled against him.

–

    Beautiful’s eyes burned into him.  He’d known this was coming.

    “Where did he get that fruit?”

   Seeker swallowed.  “From the orchard—past the cottage.  That’s where I’ve been working.”

    “And you never thought to tell me?  To tell us?”  Her voice shook, anger and hurt tangled together.  “What’s happening to you, Seeker?  I thought you had changed.”

    “I never hid it from you, Beautiful.  You never asked.  How else was I supposed to buy our food?  Besides—it wasn’t hurting anyone.”

   “Not hurting anyone?”  Beautiful’s scoff cut sharp.  “Not hurting anyone.  Ridiculous.”

    Fire flashed in her eyes.  “This is your fault.  You did this to my son.”  She spun on her heel and stormed out of the room.

    Seeker felt the old ire stirring—the same fury that had once summoned Giant Wrath.  The Shining One’s words came back to him.  He muttered under his breath, “I don’t know how to forgive… or even if I deserve to.  But I allow it.”  A single tear slipped down his cheek.

***

    The next morning Bright was up and moving, though his limp was plain to see.  Merry bounded at his heels, tail wagging furiously.   Beautiful’s eyes flickered toward Seeker, sharp with unspoken blame.

    Seeker gripped his staff and stepped to Bright.  “Son,” he said quietly, “I’ve carried this from the beginning of my journey.”  He placed it in Bright’s hands.  “It’s yours now.  Lean on it when you walk.”

    Bright turned it over, testing the weight.  Then he crossed the floor, leaning on it with each step.  A smile broke across his face.  “Thank you, Dad.”

–

    Seeker took Beautiful’s hand.  She gave a faint tug to pull away, but he held fast.

   “I’m sorry, baby,” he said at last.

   She only nodded, silent.

   “I think…” he drew a breath, steadying himself, “we’ve stayed here long enough.  It’s time to continue our journey.”

   Her eyes softened.  She nodded again.  “Yes.  Let’s continue our journey.”

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Merry the Puppy

September 18, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Wonderful tugged at Beautiful’s dress, eyes wide with pleading.  “I want a guinea pig, Mama.  Can I have a guinea pig?”

   “Mm-hmm,” Beautiful murmured, distracted.  Then the words sank in.  “Go ask your daddy.”   A guinea pig?  Where in the world did she think they’d find a guinea pig here?  And how did she even know about guinea pigs, anyway?

    Wonderful burst into the next room, hair flying.  “Daddy!  Daddy!  Mama said I can have a guinea pig.  Can I?  Can I, please?”

    “What would you even do with a guinea pig, Wonderful?” Seeker asked.

    Beautiful peeked in through the doorway as Wonderful scrambled onto his lap and wrapped her arms tight around his neck.

   “I’m gonna take him on walks!  And feed him!  And give him baths!”

    “Can you even do that with…” Seeker wrinkled his nose “guinea pigs?”

    Wonderful tossed her head back, giggling.  “Daddy, do you even know what guinea pigs are?”

    Seeker laughed with her.  “You got me, Wonderful.”

    Beautiful couldn’t help but smile.

    “And just where are you going to find a guinea pig?”

    “Just believe, Daddy.”  She slid off his lap and bolted toward the palace entrance.

    An hour slipped by with no sign of Wonderful.  Too quiet—that always meant trouble.  Beautiful sighed and rose, heading out to look for her.  

    Just outside the palace, Wonderful stood holding up a puppy, proudly displaying him to Bright.  His eyes went wide.

    “That’s not a guinea pig, Wonderful!” he exclaimed.

    The puppy was small and impossibly cute, his brown fur offset by a black muzzle and nose.  But it was his ears that caught Beautiful’s breath—huge, upright, and far too large for his tiny body.

    Beautiful hurried over, reaching Wonderful just as Seeker leaned out the palace doorway.  “Where did you find that puppy?” she asked.

    “Not telling.”  She lifted her chin, nose tilted high.  “It’s a secret.  And his name is Prince William Faithful Great-Heart.”

    “Ridiculous,” scoffed Beautiful. 

    But Wonderful plopped the puppy into her hands.  His soft brown eyes lifted to hers, and a tiny pink tongue darted out to lick her finger.   Beautiful’s lips curved despite herself.  Her heart was lost.

    “We’ll call him Merry.”

   Wonderful stomped her foot.  “I didn’t want a Merry—I wanted a guinea pig!”

   Laughter burst from them all, and Merry only wagged his tail harder.

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Phial of Forgiveness

September 17, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Seeker woke aching from head to heel.  His eyes were puffed near shut, his skull pounding with every heartbeat.  His right wrist was bound in a crude splint—two sticks strapped tight with bandages; the bone set beneath.

    He pushed himself upright on the straw mattress, a wheeze tearing from his chest, ribs protesting.  The musty air of the ruined palace closed in around him.  Two walls leaned half-crumbled, the roof long gone.  Yet enough of the ceiling clung stubbornly overhead to offer a scrap of shelter, should the rain come.

    Bright perched beside the bed, a storybook open in his lap.  His head shot up.  “Daddy!” he cried.  “Daddy’s awake!”

    “Daddy!”  Wonderful echoed from across the room, her little voice bright.

   Beautiful stepped through the doorway, eyes shining.  She swept her hand wide.  “Welcome to House Beautiful,” she said.

    “Don’t make me laugh,” Seeker groaned, pressing a hand to his ribs.  Yet a chuckle slipped out anyway.  “How long… how long have I been out?”

    “You had us worried,” Beautiful said, a faint crease between her brows.  “Three days.  It’s a miracle you’re still alive after what Wrath did to you.”

    “How… how did you manage?” Seeker stammered.

   “I went to the cottage, but they turned me away.”  She drew a slow breath.  “So, I did what I could.”

    Seeker groaned, bracing as he pushed himself upright.  Pain flared in his ribs.  Beautiful’s hand came down on his shoulder, steady but firm.  She shook her head.

   “You need to rest.  I’ll bring you something—” her mouth twitched “—well something you can eat.”

    Seeker ate the bread Beautiful set before him, then pushed to his feet and swung his satchel over his shoulder.

   “Seeker—” she began, protest sharp in her tone.

   He cut her off, voice firm.  “We have to be ready if he comes back.”

    Bright walked beside him with a slight limp, and together they explored the palace.  

    “I’m sorry, Bright,” Seeker said.  “Did the giant hurt you badly?”

    “Bright put on a brave face but nodded.  “He hurt my foot.”

   “We have to find the armory, Bright.  My staff—the Staff of Opinions—has no effect on him.  With armor and a sword, we might stand a chance.”

    Together they picked their way through the rubble, weeds pushing through the cracks, nettles choking the corners, birds nesting in the hollowed niches.  Time had not been kind to Palace Beautiful.

    As they searched, Seeker told Bright how Christian had once been outfitted with sword and shield, breastplate and helmet—how he’d fought Apollyon for days and, in the end, sent him fleeing.

    They moved down what remained of the main hall.  Near the entrance, the doorway to a side room was blocked with rubble.  Seeker set to work, slowly clearing the way through.

   Bright tugged at his sleeve.  “Daddy, can I have a sword, too?”

   Seeker gave a faint smile.  “We’ll see, Bright.  We’ll see.”

    With the way cleared, Seeker stepped inside, Bright scrambling behind him.  His guess had been right—this had been the armory.  But only ghosts remained where racks once held weapons and mannequins bore armor.  Worm-ridden fragments of wood littered the ground, and scattered pieces lay strewn across the floor.  

    A sword jutted half-buried in the rubble.  Seeker flexed his fingers—thankful the giant it was his off-hand the giant had broken.  He gripped the hilt and pulled it free.  The blade’s surface was mottled with a coat of brown-red.

    The hilt felt firm in his hand.  He swung it in a sharp downward cut.  The blade, brittle after centuries of neglect, sheared off mid-swing.  Bright flinched.  Seeker stared at the jagged stump, stunned.

    A shield lay on the floor, faint etchings of a cross still visible.  Seeker nudged it with his boot; it rang hollow.  But when he set his weight on it, the shield crumbled to dust.

   This had been the armory.  Now it was the graveyard of one.

   “We’ll have to find another way, Bright.”

   Bright only nodded.

***

    Seeker sat beneath a tree on the bluff, staring out over the Forest of Danger.  The woods stretched below him, dark and endless, their canopy rolling like a sea of green until it dissolved into shadow.

    He took out his pipe, turning it over in his hands, but left it empty.  Closing his eyes, he breathed a prayer to the King.

    “Keep my Beautiful, Bright, and Wonderful safe from Giant Wrath,” he whispered.  “I have no weapon to stand against him, and we have no place to hide.”

    Fatigue pressed down on him until his head began to nod.  Drowsiness blurred the edges of his thoughts, and he slipped into a waking dream.

    In the dream, a Shining One descended from the heavens—head and shoulders taller than any man.  His robes of green and gold rippled like living light.  Four mighty wings arched from his back, shimmering in hues of green, gold, and white.

    In his hands he bore a staff, a serpent coiled around its length, two wings outspread at the top.  His face was gentle, radiant with compassion, framed by flowing auburn hair.  His eyes shone like emerald fire.

    “Greetings, Seeker-for-Truth,” he said.  His voice rang deep and resonant, like a great bell borne on the wind.  Each word fell clear and deliberate, flowing with the ease of water over polished stone.

    Seeker trembled, the brilliance searing his eyes.  He dropped to the ground, face pressed to the earth, as if struck lifeless.  Then a hand, firm yet tender touched his own.  Power surged through him, steadying his knees as the Shining One lifted him upright.

    “Do not fear,” the voice rang—deep, clear, carrying like music on the wind.  “Your prayer has been heard.  I am sent to help you.”

    “My lord,” Seeker pleaded, his voice raw, “will you stand with me against Wrath?  I have no sword, no armor.  My body is bruised and broken, and the staff I carry is worthless in my hand.”

    The Shining One answered, each word ringing with measured weight: “Hear the words of the King:  steel and shield are but vanity before Wrath.  Only forgiveness has the power to undo him.”

    “Teach me this forgiveness,” Seeker whispered, his voice trembling—yet laced with a fragile thread of hope.

    “Day by day, you have fed Wrath’s strength.  When Beautiful yawned at your wedding.  When Jabal twisted his terms—each moment gave him ground.  And when Wrath rises, no weapon of yours can strike him down.”

   “But I don’t know how,” Seeker whispered.  His throat tightened.  “There are wounds I cannot forgive.”

    “It is not you who forgives—but you must yield to it.  If you strike Wrath, he will only swell in power.  But if you release forgiveness with tears, he will flee.”

    The Shining One placed a small phial in Seeker’s hands.  His voice rang clear: “Not one tear of yours has fallen in vain.  The King has gathered them all, and here they are kept—every drop held in this vessel.”

    The Shining One clasped Seeker’s hand.  A warmth coursed through him, loosening the ache in his body, steadying the beat of his heart.  “Peace be upon you, and upon your house,” the angel said, each word resonant as a bell toll.  Then the light faded, and he was gone.

    Seeker woke with a start.  What a curious dream.  Yet in his hand lay the crystal phial.  He lifted it, and at the bottom two—perhaps three—teardrops glimmered.  His hand went to his ribs.  No pain.  Carefully he unwound the splint and flexed his fingers.  Whole.  Healed.

***

    Beautiful leaned against Seeker as the firelight flickered across his face.  Bright played on the floor with Wonderful, their laughter carrying softly through the chamber.  Somehow, Seeker’s bones had mended—yet he offered her no explanation.  She didn’t press him.  Her eyes lingered on the bruise still dark across his forehead—horrible, stubborn, ugly, refusing to fade.

    From the darkness beyond the ruins, heavy footsteps thundered through the night.

   “He can’t get in,” she whispered, though a shiver still raced down her spine.

    The footsteps drew closer—then a thunderous slam shook the walls.  Another crash, and the stone crumbled.  Giant Wrath forced his way inside.  Bright screamed.  Wonderful wailed.  Beautiful froze where she stood, her body shrinking back, powerless before him.

    Seeker rose to his feet and walked straight toward Giant Wrath, every step measured, unhurried.  A flicker of confusion crossed the giant’s face.

    “You have no power here,” Seeker said, his voice calm.

    Wrath barked a contemptuous laugh and hefted his club high.  “Funny man,” he sneered. 

    Seeker reached into his jacket and drew out the phial, lifting it high.  A brilliant light burst forth, flooding the ruins brighter than day.  Wrath staggered back, his club clattering from his hand as he crashed to the ground, hands thrown over his eyes.

    Seeker stepped forward.

    “No…” Wrath gasped.

    “Go—and never return,” Seeker said, raising the phial high.

    The giant reeled to his feet, howling in agony, then turned and fled, vanishing into the night.

***

    Now I saw in my dream that Seeker and his family dwelt for a season in Palace Beautiful, and in those years Bright and Wonderful grew.  During that time Giant Wrath made no attempt to trouble them.

Filed Under: Bright

The Return of Giant Wrath

September 15, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

   Seeker’s thoughts swarmed, relentless as flies.  Watchful gone.  Palace Beautiful in ruins.  He had considered the possibility.  But he had been sure there would be a cottage.  And there was—only they had been turned away.  Because of him.

   He pulled out his pouch, idly filled the pipe’s bowl, and tamped it down with his thumb.  Flint struck steel, sparks catching until the tobacco smoldered, a thin curl of smoke rising.

    The ruins were no place for a baby—least of all Wonderful.  And it was far too late to start down the other side.  And there was no guarantee anyone would take them in at the bottom.  He wanted to march back and tell the man at the cottage exactly what he thought of him.

    Beautiful scoffed.  “Smoking again, Seeker?”

    “I have to think,” he said.

   “When are you going to quit?”

   “Not now, Beautiful,” he growled, pipe clenched tight between his teeth.

    “Daddy, what you doing?” Bright asked.

    “You’re being a bad influence on Bright,” she snapped.

    “All right!” he snapped.  He drew hard on the pipe, then banged it twice against the stair, scattering ash and tobacco across the stone.  A jolt shot through him—he froze.  “Beautiful!”

    Lightning flashed in her eyes.  “What?” she demanded.  Behind her, Giant Wrath loomed.  Seeker lunged for his staff.  Beautiful whirled, terror breaking across her face.  Wrath struck—one shove, and she went sprawling.  She hit the ground hard and lay motionless.

    Seeker charged and swung his staff with all his strength.  The blow landed solid—but Wrath didn’t even flinch.  It was nothing to him.  The giant’s fist came down like a hammer, slamming Seeker’s chest.  His breath vanished in a rush, and the world spun as he was hurled backward, crashing to the ground.

   Red bled at the edges of his vision.  He rolled to his side, fighting for air.  The old bruise flared, pounding in rhythm with his heartbeat.  Wonderful’s wail split the air.  Out of the corner of his eye, Comfort snatched Wonderful and darted into the ruined Palace.

    The giant fixed him with a stare, contempt burning in his eyes.  Then he turned away, lumbering toward Beautiful.  Bright planted his feet, Seeker’s staff gripped in both hands, barring the way.

    “You,” the giant sneered.  “You think you can protect her?”  With a flick of his massive hand, he swatted Bright aside as though he were nothing.  The boy hit the ground hard and burst into sobs.

   Seeker lunged, driving his fist into the giant’s leg with all his weight behind it.  Pain shot through his hand, white-hot.  The giant’s flesh was harder than the mill’s stone wall.

    Giant Wrath seized him and lifted him high.  Seeker thrashed, straining to break free, but the giant only bounded toward the palace.  With a brutal swing, he slammed Seeker against a stone pillar.  Blinding pain ripped through his arm as the pillar cracked—and his bone snapped with it.

   Giant Wrath howled in glee and hurled Seeker to the ground.  He struggled to rise, but the giant’s club smashed into his side, a rib giving way with a crack.  Another blow followed, then another.  Seeker curled tight, arms over his head, as the strikes rained down.  Darkness swallowed him.

***

    Beautiful pushed up onto her elbow, heart pounding.  Helpless, she watched as Giant Wrath’s blows rained down on Seeker, each one thudding through her chest as if she’d been struck herself.  At last, the giant grunted in grim satisfaction.  His eyes cut to her—a mocking, lingering glance—before he turned and lumbered off.

    “Seeker?” Her cry broke from her throat as she stumbled forward, pain lancing up her back.  She dropped to her knees beside him.  His eyes were shut, his body slack.  “Seeker!” The word came out as a gasp.  She bent low, pressing her ear to his lips.  A whisper of breath touched her skin—slow, faint, but there.

   Panic surged through her.  Wonderful?  Bright?  Her gaze darted wildly in the fading light until she found him—Bright, sprawled on the ground, Seeker’s staff clutched tight in his small hands.  She rushed to his side.

   Bright pushed himself upright, wincing.  “Mama… my foot hurts.”

   Beautiful caught him up in her arms, clutching him tight.  “Oh, Bright.  Oh, my Bright.”  Her voice broke into sobs.

   Comfort appeared on the stairs with Wonderful in her arms—somehow, she had soothed her cries.  Beautiful’s gaze darted from Bright to Comfort.

   “Go,” Comfort urged.  She bent toward Bright.  “Come into the palace with your sister.  You’ll be safe there.”

    Beautiful dropped to her knees beside Seeker, resting a trembling hand on his chest.  She breathed a prayer to the King. “Please keep him safe.  Keep him alive.”  Then she rose and sprinted toward the cottage with all the strength left in her.

    A faint light flickered in the window.  She pounded on the door.  No answer.  She struck it again, harder.  Still silence.  Her hand seized the latch—locked.  She hammered with all her strength, voice breaking in her chest.  Please… please, answer.

   At last, a woman’s voice drifted through the door.  “We can’t help you.  Go away.”

   “Please,” Beautiful cried, “Seeker needs help!”

   The light inside flickered—and went dark.  She was left in silence, in shadow.  Her knees buckled.  She crumpled to the ground, tears spilling hot down her cheeks.  “Oh, Almighty King,” she whispered, broken.  “I beg You—please… help us.”

Filed Under: Bright

Palace Beautiful

September 13, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Unlike Bright, Wonderful was a fussy baby.  She wailed for every reason—and for none at all—her piercing cries echoing through the cave.

    Bright filled the days playing with her, talking to her as if she understood every word.  She surprised them all when she pulled herself upright, stumbled into her first steps, and soon found her voice.

    “Wonderful, look!” Bright called.

    “No!” Wonderful shot back, her favorite word as sharp as her cry.

    When Seeker ventured from the cave, he found the giant gone.  The camp lay deserted, as if it hadn’t been touched in days—perhaps weeks.  He searched the rocky slope, even walked down to the Arbor, but there was no trace.  Giant Wrath had vanished.

    When Seeker told Beautiful, she let out a long sigh of relief.  “It’s so boring here.  I’d give anything for a bowl of Miss Cheerful’s stew again.”  She chuckled, the sound soft but genuine.

   Seeker checked again and again over the next few days.  Only when he and Beautiful were certain that Wrath was truly gone did they resolve to continue the climb to Palace Beautiful, gathering up their few belongings to set out once more.

    Seeker hefted the burden onto his back and gripped his staff.  Beautiful cradled Wonderful in her arms, while Comfort took Bright by the hand.

    “Walk!” demanded Wonderful, wriggling in Beautiful’s arms.  “Walk!”

    With a small shrug, Beautiful set her down.  Wonderful darted up the trail, then stopped to scoop up a pebble, staring it in wide-eyed wonder.

    Beautiful reached for her hand.  

    “No!”  Wonderful yanked free and scampered a few steps ahead.  She bent to snatch up another pebble and held it high.  “Look, Bright!”

    “Wonderful.”  Beautiful let out a sigh, half tired, half amused.  “If you’re going to walk, then walk—don’t stop for every pretty rock along the way.”

    Wonderful darted ahead and stopped again.  From a crack in the stone a daisy grew, small and stubborn.  She plucked it and lifted it high.  “Here, Mama!”

    Soon Wonderful grew weary and stretched out her arms.  Beautiful gathered her onto her hip.  “Will this hill never end?” she muttered.

   Seeker swiped the sweat from his brow and nodded toward the rise ahead.  “I think that’s the top.”

    “You said that the last time,” Beautiful shot back.

    Bright stuck out his bottom lip, while Wonderful had already slipped into sleep against her mother’s shoulder.

    To pass the time, Seeker told Bright about Palace Beautiful from his Book.  Other than the Delectable Mountains, it was the loveliest place in the land.  He spoke of the lions, too, cautioning, “Remember—they’re chained.  They’re only there to test how brave you are.”

    “I’m brave, Daddy!” Bright exclaimed.

    Seeker nodded, a faint smile tugging at his lips.  “Yes, Bright.  Yes, you are.”

    Gradually tufts of grass broke through the stones, and the path began to level.  Beautiful’s face lit up.  “We did it!” she gasped between ragged breaths.

    To the left of the way stood a small thicket of trees and a low wall of rough-hewn stone enclosing a narrow plot of land.  Seeker set down his burden, and Beautiful eased herself to the ground, leaning back against a tree with Wonderful nestled in her lap.  Bright sank beside her, pressing close.

    Seeker pushed open the wrought-iron gate and stepped inside.  Five headstones.  Five names.  His heart sank—he didn’t need to read them to know.  He knelt at the first stone.  Watchful.   He swallowed hard.  Discretion.  Prudence.  Piety.  Charity.

    He rose slowly, gave the stones one last lingering look, then turned away.  Back at the gate, he trudged to his burden and heaved it onto his back.  Bright had dozed off; Comfort gathered him gently into her arms.

    “What is it?”  Beautiful asked, shifting Wonderful higher on her shoulder as she stood.

    Seeker only shook his head.  He could not bring himself to speak.

    When they reached the clearing, Palace Beautiful rose before them.  Its red-brick walls and pale cornerstones stood weathered and crumbling.  Stairs climbed to an arched entry, where white stone columns still held beneath the weight of centuries—edges worn but unbroken.  Above, the roof had long since fallen, leaving jagged teeth of masonry biting into the sky.

    “Of course,” Seeker said.  “Everything changes.  No Watchful.  No Charity.”

    Beautiful only stared.

    “Come, my love,” he murmured.  “There may be a cottage nearby.”

    Seeker was right.  Just around the bend stood a timber-framed cottage, much like the one they had stayed in near the Interpreter’s house.  But no smoke curled from the chimney, and no voices drifted from within.  Seeker strode to the door and rapped his knuckles against the wood.  Then he knocked again, harder.

    A well-dressed man opened the door.  His face was kind, framed by graying hair, his build still strong though softened with age.  There was a trace of swagger in the way he carried himself.

    Beautiful lifted her eyes to him and smiled.  “We are pilgrims on the Narrow Way,” she said.  “We’re looking for a place to stay for a season.”

   He looked kindly at Beautiful, Bright, and Wonderful.  Then Seeker felt the man’s gaze rake over him—his shabby, sweat-drenched clothes, torn and patched.  The heavy burden dragging at his shoulders.  At last, the man’s eyes fixed on the dark bruise that still marred Seeker’s forehead after more than a year.  Fear flickered across his face.

    “I’m sorry,” he said, his glance darting back at Seeker, “I can spare provisions, but there’s no room here.”

    They lingered a few minutes more, but when the door finally shut, lightning flashed in Beautiful’s eyes.  “No room,” she scoffed.  “Half the house is empty.  No room!”  She huffed, sharp and indignant.

    Seeker set his burden down and sank onto the Palace steps.  From the satchel he drew his pipe.  He had to think.  He needed a plan.  But he was tired—so tired.  And beneath the weariness, the old ire was beginning to stir.

Filed Under: Bright

Bright — Chapter 2

September 12, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    Seeker and Beautiful began preparing to leave at once.  When he asked about the house, she said, “Leave it.  I don’t want to spend one more minute than we must in this accursed town.”

    Between their savings, Seeker and Beautiful had enough to buy a donkey to carry their belongings, and provisions for their journey.

    Three large canvas bags.  One for Seeker’s books, another for their dishes and Beautiful’s keepsakes, and the last for Bright’s books and toys.

    “What’cha doing, Daddy?” Bright asked.

    “Me and Mama are packing, Bright.”

    “Why?”

    “We’re going to live somewhere else,” Seeker said, tussling Bright’s hair.

    “Where?” Bright’s eyes lit with excitement.

    “Well, Bright, first we have to climb a big mountain.  Then we’ll visit Palace Beautiful.”

    “Daddy, did you know… did you know that’s Mama’s other name?”

    Seeker laughed. “Of course I know, Bright.”

    “Does Mama really have a palace?”

    Beautiful walked into the room, “Nobody knows, Bright.”  Her eyes danced.

    “Will I have friends there?” Bright asked.

    “Lots and lots of them,” Seeker said.  “Are you going to miss your friends here?”

    Bright frowned and shook his head.  “People here are too mean.”

    “Enough questions now, Bright.  Go help your mama pack your toys, okay?”

    “Okay, Daddy!” 

***   

    It was still dark when Seeker loaded their burdens onto the donkey.  As the sun rose, he led it through the village streets, Beautiful following with Bright’s hand in hers.

    In the early morning light Delight took on a sinister new shape—Deceit.  Seven years he had toiled here and never made the connections.  This was where Adam-the-First had tried to enslave Faithful.  Seven years—wasted, he thought bitterly.

    “Seeker!”  The voice cut through the morning quiet as they started across the bridge spanning the ravine.  Jabal strode up to them.  He bowed low.  “Beautiful.”   Impeccably dressed, as always—no hint of sleep left in his face.

    “I didn’t believe the rumors, so I had to come myself.  Didn’t I just give you a promotion?  Name your price, Seeker—you’re like a son to me.”

    “There’s nothing can keep us here,” Beautiful said.

    “I see,” said Jabal. “Seeker?”

    “Yes, Jabal.  We’ve made up our minds.”

    Jabal nodded, then snapped his fingers.  A serving-man stepped from the shadows.  “Bring his payment.”

    The man slipped away toward Jabal’s office.

    “I told you in Delight—”

    “Deceit,” Beautiful corrected.

    “In Desire… um, Delight,” he continued, thrown off beat, “all are rewarded for their hard work.  I wish you’d come to me yesterday.”

    The man reappeared, a folio in one hand and a bag of coins heavy in the other.  

    “Twenty gold down on your house, purchased at one hundred twenty.  Current value—two hundred.  Twenty for my commission.  That leaves one hundred,” Jabal’s voice was businesslike.

    Beautiful’s eyes went wide.  He opened the folio, revealing a note:  Debt paid in full.  Claim to house relinquished.   “Sign here.”

    The serving-man handed him a pen and a bottle of ink.  Seeker dipped the nib and scrawled his name.  Then the man passed him the bag of gold.

    “I trust you don’t feel the need to count it?”  His voice was flat.

    Seeker hefted the bag’s weight.  “No, Jabal.  No need.”

    “Oh, and one other minor thing, remaining, in the terms of your service,” Jabal said.

    Seeker frowned.  Charm stepped from the shadows, her green eyes downcast, her movements quiet.

    “My daughters will travel with you.”

    Beautiful exploded.  “That… that…” She trembled with rage.  “That whore won’t be part of my life—or my son’s.”  She stepped in front of Bright, one hand thrust out in refusal.

    Charm stepped back.

    “Very well,” Jabal said.

    Comfort emerged, tears streaming down her face, and fell to her knees.  “Take me with you, Beautiful.”  Her eyes pleaded.  “Please?”

    Beautiful hesitated.  

    “She,” Comfort spat, “isn’t my sister.”

    “Comfort!” Charm exclaimed.  Jabal frowned and shifted his stance.

    “Haven’t I served you well all these years?  I’ve been faithful—I would never betray you.”  She shot Charm a look of disdain.

    “Very well,” Beautiful said.  She started to rub her belly, then quickly let her hand fall.  “I’m sure you’ll be a help—especially now.”

    “You are always welcome here in Delight,” Jabal said.  He smiled, but the warmth never reached his eyes.

–

    Seeker loaded the gold onto the donkey.  They set out without looking back.  Beautiful walked at Seeker’s side, Bright’s hand in hers, with Comfort trailing behind.

    The sun stood overhead when they reached the spring at the crossroads.  It lay at the base of the Hill of Difficulty.  Seeker unstrapped their burdens from the donkey and let it wander to graze before the climb ahead.

    Seeker hoped to reach the Arbor before sundown and rest there for the night.  With Beautiful and Bright’s pace, he wouldn’t attempt the summit.  Taking the paths around the mountain—through the Crags of Destruction or the Forest of Danger—was never an option.

    Beautiful spread a cloth and set out bread and cheese.  She dipped Seeker’s tin cup into the cool water of the bubbling spring and handed it to Bright.

    While they ate, four men emerged from the Crags of Destruction—rough-bearded, hard-eyed.  Seeker reached for his staff.

    The leader pointed at the donkey.  “Take it,” he barked.

    Seeker stepped in front of Beautiful and Bright.  One robber moved toward the donkey.  The others closed in on their belongings.  He swung hard.  His staff cracked against a man’s ribs, the sound of wood on bone ringing sharp.  A club struck him from behind.  He staggered.  The staff slipped from his hands as he fell.  A boot slammed into his side and drove the breath from his chest.

    Beautiful cried out, clutching Bright in her arms.  Comfort stepped between them and the men, wrapping her arms protectively around them both.

    “Looky what we have here,” one of the robbers called, holding up the bag of gold.  

    Another slit the canvas with his knife.  Seeker’s books spilled onto the ground.  “Books,” he scoffed.

    A third ripped open the other bags.  Their contents scattered across the dirt.  A plate clattered on the stones and cracked in two.

    Seeker pushed up on his elbow, rage burning through the ache.  He lunged again, but a blow sent him sprawling face-first in the dirt.

    Moments later they were gone—leading the donkey away with their gold and provisions.  Their footsteps faded, leaving only the bubbling of the spring and Bright’s frightened sobs.

    Beautiful rushed to Seeker’s side.  Shards of their dishes lay scattered on the ground.  One of Bright’s toys, a small wooden soldier, lay on its side with an arm broken.

    Seeker reached for his staff, chest heaving, eyes burning with fury.  “They’ll pay for this,” he growled.  He started toward Destruction, but Beautiful caught his hand and held him back.

    “Stop, Seeker,” she begged.  “It’s only things.  We can’t lose you too.”

    Seeker drew a long breath and let it out slowly.  His heart still raced.  He sank onto the grass, fighting to steady himself.  His breath came ragged and uneven.

    “Okay,” he whispered.

***

    Beautiful stitched together the torn canvas the robbers had left, fashioning a pack with straps for Seeker.  She quickly made two smaller bags for herself and Comfort.  Bright put on a brave face and insisted on carrying one too, though Seeker tucked only a few of his toys inside.

    Seeker carved a small sign:  Beware of robbers from Destruction.  He fixed it to a branch and drove it into the ground, laying their broken dishes at its base.

   Beautiful and Comfort helped him shoulder his great burden and slung their own bags across their backs.  Together, they began their ascent.

    Years at the tread-wheel had not prepared him for this.  Within a dozen steps his chest was burning.  His heart pounded, and he could not catch his breath.  The path was rocky.  Sharp stones pressing through his boots.  More than once he slipped on loose gravel, and at last he fell to his hands and knees and needed help to rise.

    The sun beat down on them, and sweat ran freely, soaking his clothes.  His mouth tasted of iron from a split lip in the fall.

    Up the path he heard Bright wailing, “I’m dying, I’m dying!”

   Beautiful, panting, snapped at him, “You’re not dying, Bright.  Just… breathing… hard.  Like Mama.”

    Beautiful turned to Seeker.  “Let’s…  take a break.”

    Seeker agreed, thankful though he hid it.  He leaned forward, easing the weight of his burden from his shoulder.  Beautiful and Bright sat on a rock, drinking from his canteen.  He didn’t dare sit.  If he did, he knew he’d never get back up.

    The irony wasn’t lost on him.  He had started his journey more than ten years before, and yet here he was—clothes worn thin and torn, a huge burden on his back.  Just like Christian at the start of his journey.  Only unlike Christian, he thought bitterly, he was climbing the Hill of Difficulty.

    Hours passed.  The sun slipped behind the peak, and a soothing breeze stirred the air.  Seeker paused, panting for breath.

   Beautiful sighed.  “We must be near the top.”

   Seeker gave a wry laugh.  “Not even halfway.  But the Arbor shouldn’t be far.  We’ll rest there tonight.”

    Bright sprawled in the middle of the path, eyes squeezed shut.

   “Get up, Bright,” Beautiful scolded.  “Don’t lie in the dirt like that.”

   He only moaned in reply.

    “Honey,” she said, “Put your burden down.  Rest a few minutes.”

    Seeker nodded and started to slip his arms from the straps—when a boulder thundered past.

    Seeker’s eyes darted upward.  Had it fallen from the outcropping ahead?  He scanned the rocks, tracing higher—then froze.  Too far.  Too large.  No ordinary man could stand at that distance.  A giant loomed, grotesque in form, clad only in a ragged loincloth, a boulder raised high above his head.

    Beautiful gasped and yanked Bright to his feet.

    The giant hurled the boulder.  It slammed into the path, missing Seeker by a breath, then careened down the slope.

    “Run!” he shouted.

    Beautiful froze, clutching Bright’s hand.  She spun toward the path behind them.

    “Up!  Up!”  Seeker gasped. 

    Bright burst forward, scrambling up the path, with Beautiful close behind.  Seeker’s chest heaved, vision blurring as he fought for breath—but he didn’t slow, driving himself after them.

    “The giant can’t see us here,” Beautiful gasped as they paused in the shadow of the overhang.

    From above came low, angry growls.

    Just ahead lay the Arbor, resting place for pilgrims.  Beautiful pointed, but Seeker shook his head—just as a boulder smashed into the Arbor.

    Comfort came running and stopped beside them, panting and trembling.  A rock crashed at her feet.

    Seeker dropped his burden and seized Bright’s shoulders.  “Run—and don’t stop.  Not until you reach the top.”  He motioned to Beautiful.  “Go!  I’m right behind you.  If I have to slow him down…”  He raised his staff.  “Don’t look back.”

    Beautiful shook her head.  “No!” she cried.

    Another rock slammed into the path.  They didn’t hesitate—they ran, scrambling up the steep incline.

    The path leveled as they neared the Arbor, but they didn’t slow.  Seeker’s vision flared red as pain exploded in his temple.  He sprawled forward, crashing into Beautiful and Bright knocking them tumbling to the ground with him.

   He curled on the ground, crying from the pain, unable to stand, unable even to sit up.    Beautiful and Bright sobbed beside him. 

   A voice boomed across the mountain.  “I am Wrath—bane of your father, and your father’s father.  You cannot defeat me, and you cannot hide.  Wherever you go, I will find you!”

    Silence.  The boulders ceased.  Seeker’s vision cleared.  Beautiful lay on the ground, clutching Bright in her arms, both of them shivering in terror.  Beside them rested the boulder that had struck him.

    They couldn’t stay here.  They couldn’t go back.  Their only hope lay ahead—at the summit, in the safety of Palace Beautiful.  

    He pushed himself to his feet and reached out—one hand for Beautiful, one for Bright—then touched her belly.

    “Is she… is she okay?” he asked.

    Beautiful nodded, tears streaking her cheeks.  She touched his forehead.  Pain shot through his skull, nearly doubling him over.

    “We can’t stay here,” he said.  “He’ll be back.”  He took their hands, and together they climbed upward—slow but steady.

    The ground shook.  Behind them, footsteps echoed—Giant Wrath.  Fear gripped him.  His staff—he’d left it where it fell at the Arbor.  They couldn’t go back now.

    Bright dropped to the ground.

   “Get up!” Seeker barked.  Bright refused.  Seeker scooped him into his arms, and together he and Beautiful ran as fast as they could.

    Then they saw it—a narrow cave mouth just off the path.  Seeker, Bright in his arms, dove inside with Beautiful and Comfort close behind—just as Giant Wrath loomed into view, a massive club sweeping through the air.

    Giant Wrath thrust his club into the cave, but the entrance was too narrow for him to follow.  They groped forward, stumbling through the dark.

   A faint glimmer shone ahead.  They could just make out a doorway—too clean, too well-formed to be natural.

    When they stepped through, they entered a chamber carved from limestone, narrow shafts in the ceiling letting in a soft, steady light.

    By the door stood a great round stone with handholds carved into it.  Seeker strained against it until it rolled into place, sealing the entrance. 

    Then they collapsed onto the floor, breathless with relief.

    The edges of the chamber dissolved into shadow in the fading light, leaving the space at once cavernous and secure.  One wall held a hollowed hearth, and a narrow flue carved upward like a chimney, the stone above streaked black with old smoke.  In a side alcove, branches lay stacked in neat order, cut and ready.  Seeker crossed two sticks, tucked kindling between, and struck steel to flint.  Sparks caught, and soon a flame licked upward.  Fire pushed back the darkness, casting the room in a shifting, golden glow.

    On the opposite wall, a thin thread of water trickled into a carved stone basin—broad and low, its rim worn smooth by years of use.

    Along the chamber’s edges, benches and low seats had been hewn from the rock itself, their surfaces worn smooth by centuries of weary pilgrims leaning here.

    They sat in silence, watching until the fire sank low.  Then moonbeams spilled through the skylights, flooding the chamber with light almost as bright as day.

    Seeker set his hands to the stone, ready to roll it back.  Beautiful touched him lightly, her hand soft against his.  “Don’t,” she whispered.  “He might still be out there.”

    Seeker nodded and let his hand fall.  “All right.  Our things can wait until morning.”

    In the silver glow filtering through the shafts, he followed the narrow steps downward to a lower level, where smaller chambers had been cut into granite.  Each held a stone slab for a bed and an alcove stacked with folded woolen blankets.  Seeker, Beautiful, and Bright would share one room, and Comfort would take another.

***

    Morning seeped into the cave in muted light.  Seeker slipped outside to recover his burden and staff.    Beautiful brushed her lips against the dark bruise across his forehead and urged him to tread softly, to keep a watchful eye for Wrath.

    After he left, she began to explore.  The water in the basin shimmered cool and clear—pure enough to drink.

    Beside the hearth stood a wide-mouthed clay jar she hadn’t noticed before—worn and chipped, holding only a few handfuls of meal—and a small clay cruse with a narrow neck, filled with golden oil.  Just enough for several small loaves of bread.  The hearth itself was small and plain, yet large enough to bake them.  With their provisions stolen, this would sustain them only for a day, and they would need to continue on.

–

    Seeker staggered into the doorway, dropped his burden and staff onto the floor, and sank onto a stone seat, chest heaving, sweat streaming down his face.  Beautiful dipped his tin cup into the basin and handed it to him.

    He drank slowly.  “I thought he was gone… until I returned.  He was waiting for me.”  A long breath shuddered from him.

***

    From the chamber where they sat, a stairway climbed deeper into the mountain, ending at a locked door.  Seeker slipped his clasp-knife between the door and jamb and lifted the latch, just as he had done many times at the Interpreter’s tower.

    Inside lay a chamber of pure alabaster, its walls etched with stories of antiquity.  Sunlight poured through the skylights, setting the stone aglow.  Seeker paused before the first relief: two brothers, two altars—one piled with fruit of the field, the other with a lamb.

    “What’s that, Daddy?”  Bright asked, pressing close beside him, eyes fixed on the carving.

   “That’s Cain and Abel, Bright.”

   “Mama read me about them,” he said.  “I like the fruit better.”

    Seeker only nodded.

    Bright pointed at the next carving—the ark that Noah had built.  “He… he brought two of each animal.  One chimpanzee, and one bonobo.  The bonobo was the mama.”

    “Is that so?”  Seeker asked.

    Bright nodded, eyes shining with certainty.

    The walls showed Enoch, who walked with the King, and Abraham setting out with Sarah and Isaac.

    “Just like us, right?”  Bright said.

    And Jacob with his sons—the twelve brothers.  Joseph leading them into Egypt, and Moses bringing them out again.  All around the alabaster chamber more scenes unfolded.  Joshua and Rahab, Gideon, Barak, and Samson; Jephthah, David and Samuel.

    One by one they studied the carvings, Bright’s eyes shining, until they had seen them all.  Then Seeker took his hand and led him back down the stairs to Beautiful.

   “Mama, Mama!  Daddy read me a story.”

   Beautiful glanced at Seeker, puzzled.

   “No,” Seeker said.  “You read him the stories.  I only showed him the pictures.”

***

    Now I saw in my dream that Beautiful baked four loaves, and they ate and were satisfied.

    But when the morning came and Seeker went to the entrance, he saw that Giant Wrath had pitched a camp and kept watch, waiting for them to continue their journey.

    When Beautiful checked the clay jar, she found just enough flour for that day’s need.  The next morning Giant Wrath still waited.  Yet to her surprise, the jar held enough again.

    Days turned into months, yet the giant lingered at the cave’s mouth.  And still the flour never ran out, and the oil never ran dry.  So they remained in the Cave of Resolution until the time came for Beautiful to give birth to Wonderful.

   One spring morning Seeker woke to sunlight streaming into their chamber. Beautiful touched his shoulder and shook him gently. “It’s time,” she whispered.

    “I’ll go get Comfort,” he said, easing her onto the stone slab. Bright trailed him up the stairs to the main room.

    “Play with your toys. Are you excited to meet your new sister?”

    Bright blinked at him, puzzled.

    Just then Comfort entered, met Seeker’s eyes, and gave a quick nod. “Boil some water,” she said, already moving down the stairs.

    Within minutes Seeker had a fire roaring. He filled the kettle from the basin with his tin cup and set it in the hearth.

    When the kettle began to whistle, Seeker rested a hand on Bright’s shoulder. “Wait here. I’ll be right back.”

    Bright looked up from his book. “Okay, Daddy.”

    Seeker took up the kettle and hurried back down the stairs.

    “Push!” Comfort’s voice rang down the passage. Beautiful cried out in pain.

    Then came the sharp cry of a newborn. Seeker blinked. Already? He had braced himself for a long night of struggle.

    He stepped into the doorway, and Comfort lifted the child for him to see. His heart skipped a beat. Wonderful. She was so small, her head perfectly round, her skin flushed red as a beet. He had never seen a more beautiful sight in all his life.

    “Hello, Wonderful,” he whispered, eyes filling with tears. She reached out and wrapped her tiny hand around his finger, holding fast.

    Comfort laid Wonderful on a towel, poured water into a basin, and dipped a strip of linen to wash her gently.

    Seeker took Beautiful’s hand. Her skin glowed, her eyes soft. “How’s my Beautiful?” he asked.

    She smiled.

    Comfort wrapped Wonderful in a swaddling cloth and placed her in Seeker’s arms. She gave a small curtsey, then slipped quietly away.

    “Here’s our daughter, Wonderful,” he said, and gently laid her in Beautiful’s arms.

    Beautiful gazed down at her. At last, she whispered, “She looks just like you—only prettier.” She smiled, and the whole room seemed to brighten.

    Comfort reappeared, leading Bright by the hand.

    Bright stopped, stared, and pointed. “Ahahahaha—it’s a baby!” He paused, frowning. “Where did… she… come from?”

    Beautiful laughed. “She came from my belly. She’s your sister—Wonderful.”

    “From your belly?” Bright giggled. “Don’t be silly, Mama.”

    He crept closer, touched her with one tentative finger, then laughed again. Leaning over, he planted a quick kiss on her head.

    “You love your baby sister, don’t you?” Seeker asked.

   Bright nodded, then his face fell. Sadness crept in, and he lowered his head.

    Beautiful held Wonderful out. “Go to Daddy, Wonderful.” Then she drew Bright onto the bed. He snuggled against her, and she rocked him gently.

    “Don’t be sad, Bright,” she whispered. “You’re still my baby too. You’ll always be my baby.”

    Seeker cradled Wonderful against his chest and sang softly:

Wonderful—
Born in adversity,
Strong and true,
You shine like a priceless gem,
Bringing redemption with you

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Wonderful

September 11, 2025 by K. Blackthorn

    One spring morning Seeker woke to sunlight streaming into their chamber. Beautiful touched his shoulder and shook him gently. “It’s time,” she whispered.

    “I’ll go get Comfort,” he said, easing her onto the stone slab. Bright trailed him up the stairs to the main room.

    “Play with your toys. Are you excited to meet your new sister?”

    Bright blinked at him, puzzled.

    Just then Comfort entered, met Seeker’s eyes, and gave a quick nod. “Boil some water,” she said, already moving down the stairs.

    Within minutes Seeker had a fire roaring. He filled the kettle from the basin with his tin cup and set it in the hearth.

    When the kettle began to whistle, Seeker rested a hand on Bright’s shoulder. “Wait here. I’ll be right back.”

    Bright looked up from his book. “Okay, Daddy.”

    Seeker took up the kettle and hurried back down the stairs.

    “Push!” Comfort’s voice rang down the passage. Beautiful cried out in pain.

    Then came the sharp cry of a newborn. Seeker blinked. Already? He had braced himself for a long night of struggle.

    He stepped into the doorway, and Comfort lifted the child for him to see. His heart skipped a beat. Wonderful. She was so small, her head perfectly round, her skin flushed red as a beet. He had never seen a more beautiful sight in all his life.

    “Hello, Wonderful,” he whispered, eyes filling with tears. She reached out and wrapped her tiny hand around his finger, holding fast.

    Comfort laid Wonderful on a towel, poured water into a basin, and dipped a strip of linen to wash her gently.

    Seeker took Beautiful’s hand. Her skin glowed, her eyes soft. “How’s my Beautiful?” he asked.

    She smiled.

    Comfort wrapped Wonderful in a swaddling cloth and placed her in Seeker’s arms. She gave a small curtsey, then slipped quietly away.

    “Here’s our daughter, Wonderful,” he said, and gently laid her in Beautiful’s arms.

    Beautiful gazed down at her. At last, she whispered, “She looks just like you—only prettier.” She smiled, and the whole room seemed to brighten.

    Comfort reappeared, leading Bright by the hand.

    Bright stopped, stared, and pointed. “Ahahahaha—it’s a baby!” He paused, frowning. “Where did… she… come from?”

    Beautiful laughed. “She came from my belly. She’s your sister—Wonderful.”

    “From your belly?” Bright giggled. “Don’t be silly, Mama.”

    He crept closer, touched her with one tentative finger, then laughed again. Leaning over, he planted a quick kiss on her head.

    “You love your baby sister, don’t you?” Seeker asked.

   Bright nodded, then his face fell. Sadness crept in, and he lowered his head.

    Beautiful held Wonderful out. “Go to Daddy, Wonderful.” Then she drew Bright onto the bed. He snuggled against her, and she rocked him gently.

    “Don’t be sad, Bright,” she whispered. “You’re still my baby too. You’ll always be my baby.”

    Seeker cradled Wonderful against his chest and sang softly:

Wonderful—

Born in adversity,

Strong and true,

You shine like a priceless gem,

Bringing redemption with you

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